Please asses my Task 1

[Ecro]

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The two maps show information about an island's before and after state.
In the beginning, the island was pretty much empty, isolated and inhabitable. It had a beach on the western side, and several trees occupied a small part of the island. Other than that, there was nothing else that could be seen there.
After all the facilities and buildings were constructed, a lot of things have changed. There's a reception building in the center, surrounded by a vehicle track. On its northern side is a restaurant which has its own vehicle track, and on the southern part is a pier. To the right of the reception are accommodation buildings, connected with a footpath. To the left there's another accommodation center, and a footpath which leads to the beach where people can go swimming.
In conclusion, the island became much more habitable as a result of all the facilities that were built.

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hi Ecro,
I think that you could have added a few more details, such as the size of the island, but basically this is a good report. Vocab and grammar are very good.
David

[Ecro]

Hi Ecro,
I think that you could have added a few more details, such as the size of the island, but basically this is a good report. Vocab and grammar are very good.
David

Yes, I think I could add more details, too.
Thanks for the feedback!