Writing Task 1 - Line graph

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bakonet
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Writing Task 1 - Line graph

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The line graph shows data on books expenditure in 4 countries over the period shown. It can be clearly seen that there was an upward trend in the amount of money spent on books, although the most significant increase could be seen in Austria.

In 1995, Germany spent 80 million dollars on reading, which was 25 million dollars more than France. Following closely was Italy at 50 million dollars, while Austria spent the least on books (30 million dollars). Apart from a drop from 1999 to 2003, Germany figure continued to rise to 95 million dollars in 2005. Italy number shared a similar pattern with a fall between 1997 and 1999 before an increase by 10 million dollars in the next 6 years. France and Austria are two countries that spent an increasing amount of money on books (except a standstill period from 1999 to 2001 in Austria). By 2005, roughly 65 million dollars was spent on books in each country.

In conclusion, over a ten-year period, the number of people reading books in these countries had increased sharply.

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Johnson zhang
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I will give a go


The line graph shows four countries' yearly book expenditure from 1995 to 2005. During this period, readers of these countries had increased their spending on books on a yearly basis.
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The line graph compares the figure for money spent on books by three different countries over a period of 10 years.

It can be clearly seen that the figure for Germany remained at above all countries on spending money for books. Meanwhile, there is a dramatic increase in the Austria figures.

In 1995, Germany spent money of about 80 million, the highest amount amid the others while the figure for France and Italy saw about 55 million and 50 million receptively. At the same time, the rate of Austria stood at 30 million.

Between 1995 and 2005, the amount of money on books in German rose to approximately 100 million in 2005, the highest rate of spending among the other countries. Likewise, the figure for France rose moderately from roughly 55 million to 75 million, an increase of 20 million in ten years.

Meanwhile, the rate of Austria saw a significant increase, from just 30 million to just over 60 million in 2005. The most noticeable feature in Austria is in the year 2003 when Austria exceeded Italy for the first time and continued to rise until the end of years in question. Therefore, Italy was the only one country which has the least amount of money spent for Books, at nearly 50 million in 2005.
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