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my version uploaded.

Hi Durai,
I am thinking about combine this question with "a toy" topic which I practiced before.
1. I bought a Lego Car for my son.
2. I played it with my son. blablabla.

I attached the record.

HI Durai，
I upload my version on this topic.


Best Regards,
Allen

very clear. great accent.
a little bit slow.
Could add more information.

Hi Durai, A few comments based on my own perspective. In the modern world, there are movements away from written exams to practical assessments. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this trend. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...

HI Akr2200,
It seems that your topic question is not correct. I can't comment on it if your topic question is not clear to me.

Some people believe that student always learn better? in a group rather than study individually, to what extent do you agree or disagree?

My answer: It is true that due to the decrease of birthrate and longer life expectancy, many societies such as Europe, Japan and China are facing the problem of aging society. It is even expected that in some societies, there will be more old people (60 plus age group) than young adults (20 to 60 ag...

sorry, I just read the topic question again. It does say that " that proportion of old people will be higher than young people in the future ".
please ignore relevant comments above.

Hi Durai, Task response seems good. one positive and one negative are presented. FYI: A phrase " aging/aged society " can be used in this essay. "senior citizens" can be used to replace "old people" It is expected that proportion of old people will be higher than young ...

Hi Durai, I totally agree with you. They even gave me a 9 on that globalization essay! Anyway, it's quite cheap and makes us happy. LOL :-) It ' s crazy , how can I get band 8.5, when I am struggling to get band 7. Now I feel that this correction is a waste of money.. :-), Let's try to avoid any mis...

Even in this day when gender equality is highly valued, the management sector of many companies and organizations is still a male dominated world. While some people attribute this to gender discrimination and argue that companies should offer the same number of managerial posts to females, from my p...

Employers should ensure there are equal number of males and females in managerial posts in companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Feminism, a word tr...

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to submit my essay on the due date - 05 May 2014. The essay topic I chose is "The difference between Linux and real time operate systems" and I have been working on it for 2 weeks since it was assigned. I have got a great pro...

Hi Durai, Some personal understandings: Some of them are not mistakes, just the way I would like to do. You can comment on them. Dear Mr.Smith, I am Durai, and I am writing to inform you that I am unable to submit my essay on the due date. Please allow me to explain the reasons. I looked many lette...

Competitiveness among high school students should be encouraged. Do you agree or disagree? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Over the last decade, competition among people has significantly increased the ...

@Durai, I want to comment a little on your sample. Over the last five decades, violence among young people has significantly increased the world over. Some opine that the main cause of this increase is the growth in violent media. From this many concluded that violent media is rapidly increasing cri...

Thank you Imoore, I just noticed that you reviewed my speaking samples! Thank you. I posted several samples several months ago and Ryan commented on one of them. After that, I got my dreaming 7 on speaking. Unfortunately, I just got 6.5 on the latest attempted. However, The biggest challenge for me ...

4 is the score for task response. He may get high score on other sections.

Quite informative! I make such mistake sometimes. Please check one of my essays which I posted earlier. http://ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=1769&hilit=+shopping I asked a question in that post: after finishing this piece, I found I probably made a mistake. The question is asking the ...

Over the last decade, the number of children who go to primary schools has significantly increased the world over. (seems not relevant to the topic ) While some opine that juveniles (From my understanding, juveniles mean teenagers, preschool boys ad girls are not juveniles.) , before staring their p...

Quite inspiring.

It is impossible to live without struggling on something, unless you don't have any ambition - in which case, you never live.

HI Durai, Some personal understanding listed. Most of them are wording choices. I cannot guarantee that my choices are all correct, I just tried to check those that I feel not natural. I could be wrong. Over the last decade, the number of traffic accidents has significantly increased the world over....

Seems like BC already grouped IELTS test by time zone.
So India's topic question is different from Australia and China.

Hi, Durai,
I am on my phone now.
Just a short reply.
DUI ,under influence driving, is a good phrase.