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- Fri Jun 19, 2015 4:21 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2354
Re: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
Hi, In my opinion the letter does not address the question part "what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again"? . If you are allowed to sit in course for free , problem will not get solved, it is still there. Good use of vocab, but i am not sure "You see" is a c...
- Thu Jun 18, 2015 7:10 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Is this a band 8 speech?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 11237
Re: Is this a band 8 speech?
thanks for the suggestions. I can understand why my voice sounds stressful and fluency suffers, It's because of I was trying to fit in a large speech in 2 minutes. So I'll try to relax a bit more next time.
- Wed Jun 17, 2015 5:12 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2354
One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
Write a letter to a college Principal, where you attended a one day computer course and are unhappy about the way it was conducted. Explain what was the type of the course, what happened and what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again. Dear Principal, I am writing to express my dis...
- Wed Jun 17, 2015 8:51 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT task 1 .... PLEASE EVALUATE THE TASk..
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1261
Re: GT task 1 .... PLEASE EVALUATE THE TASk..
You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the Manager. In your letter • say what experience you have • ask what the work involves • enquire about conditions Answer: Dear Sir, My name is Faruqe Ahmed, studying in Hotel Management...
- Wed Jun 17, 2015 7:56 am
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: How many words are too much in writing tasks?
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1913
Re: How many words are too much in writing tasks?
Sounds right
- Tue Jun 16, 2015 4:21 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Can anyone please suggest a band for this essay?
- Replies: 0
- Views: 581
Can anyone please suggest a band for this essay?
People today often buy new things instead of fixing the old things. Discuss the causes and effect of this.(what are the causes of this trend? What do they effect on themselves and others?) Ever since the genesis of industrialization, people’s lifestyles have gone through paradigm shift. This is evid...
- Thu Jun 11, 2015 4:47 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: How many words are too much in writing tasks?
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1913
Re: How many words are too much in writing tasks?
Thanks a lot, David.
- Wed Jun 10, 2015 2:45 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: How many words are too much in writing tasks?
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1913
How many words are too much in writing tasks?
Hi, David, hope you're doing good. I just wanted to ask how many words are too much in ielts writing task 1 and 2? For instance, are 340words for task 2 essay are acceptable?
Regards
Regards
- Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:37 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: [First Attempt Ever] Can anyone please comment on my essay (Task 2)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 618
Re: [First Attempt Ever] Can anyone please comment on my essay (Task 2)
For a first attempt, it's an amazing essay. You seem to have thorough understanding of grammatical mechanics such as commas,hyphens etc. Native speaker, I guess?
In my judgemtn this essay will get around 7-8 bands
In my judgemtn this essay will get around 7-8 bands
- Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:29 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Is this a band 8 speech?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 11237
Re: Is this a band 8 speech?
Thanks a bazillion, I will keep those points in mind while practicing especially about conclusion and pronunciation.
- Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:14 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Kindly critique my essay, target band 8
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1076
Re: Kindly critique my essay, target band 8
Hi, terry! It's been truly enjoyable to read such the elaborate writing! Indeed a good job! If you allow me to add some critique, please, note: 1) In 'Introduction' you never say what exactly will be looked at (I mean a brief content of your paragraphs is expected here or at least the main ideas). ...
- Sun May 31, 2015 10:05 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Kindly critique my essay, target band 8
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1076
Kindly critique my essay, target band 8
Some believe that global warming is the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Ever since the dawn of industrialization, world’s environment has been chan...
- Sat May 30, 2015 11:52 am
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Differences Between Writing Task 2 General + Academic Topics + Answer Structures
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3763
Re: Differences Between Writing Task 2 General + Academic Topics + Answer Structures
I'm also curious about it. Let's hope some examiner shares insights on this soon
- Sat May 23, 2015 6:42 am
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Speaking Section 2 (cue card) question
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2563
Re: Speaking Section 2 (cue card) question
David, I think he meant the simulation of real speaking tests/mock exams, which are available in abundance on Youtube
- Tue May 19, 2015 7:44 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1680
Re: Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?
Hi Terry, I guess you missed the "article" in both the sentences. ..and as [a] result enjoy a higher degree.. ..ever since the initiation of [the] women’s rights" (already pointed out by Matthews sir) Thanks! oh I see. Thanks for pointing out. I can't believed I missed it ;-)
- Tue May 19, 2015 6:08 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1680
Re: Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?
Hi thanks a lot Dr.Matthew. Since my target band is 8 that means I still need work.
Could you please tell me what's wrong with my this sentence?
" and as result enjoy a higher degree"
and this one
" ever since the initiation of [the] women’s rights"
Thanks once again.
Could you please tell me what's wrong with my this sentence?
" and as result enjoy a higher degree"
and this one
" ever since the initiation of [the] women’s rights"
Thanks once again.
- Mon May 18, 2015 6:56 pm
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Is this a band 8 speech?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 11237
Is this a band 8 speech?
Cue Card
Talk about a job that is important in your country. Please say
- What job is it?
- Who can work in this job?
- What skills are necessary for doing it?
http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/fi ... 7a48d08354
Talk about a job that is important in your country. Please say
- What job is it?
- Who can work in this job?
- What skills are necessary for doing it?
http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/fi ... 7a48d08354
- Mon May 18, 2015 6:45 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1680
Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?
Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. The topic of whether boys and girls should be taught in mixed schools has bee...
- Mon May 18, 2015 5:39 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: General training (Writing). Target score 7+.
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2021
Re: General training (Writing). Target score 7+.
Hi, don't you think '386 words' is too long? Yeah, I do. The thing is that it was my first essay and I just tried to express my thoughts worrying only about grammar and content and not paying attention to the length. I'll try to condense it and apply some of tips and hints from this forum. Thank yo...
- Mon May 18, 2015 5:37 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my task 2 essay (Academic)
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1046
Re: Please evaluate my task 2 essay (Academic)
Nice essay. One thing though, Ryan is of opinion that you should avoid personal pronouns like I,we,our to make your writing sound more academic.
- Mon May 18, 2015 12:21 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: General training (Writing). Target score 7+.
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2021
Re: General training (Writing). Target score 7+.
Hi, don't you think '386 words' is too long?
- Sun May 17, 2015 8:06 pm
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Any comments and estimated band score please.
- Replies: 6
- Views: 11612
Re: Any comments and estimated band score please.
Nice speech, flawless fluency. And the best part (at least for me) was that you have a neutral accent, which makes it very easy to understand. I just have to say one thing about it. You said something along the lines of "government is well aware of this facility". As far as I'm concerned, ...
- Sun May 17, 2015 12:57 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Writing synonyms in reading answers?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1789
Re: Writing synonyms in reading answers?
Hello Terry, An excellent question to kick off with! The answer is that candidates must use the exact words from the passage in their answers. (This is the case in the example you mentioned.) If this is not possible (e.g. it would make the answer grammatically incorrect), the correct form of the wo...
- Sun May 17, 2015 9:31 am
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Writing synonyms in reading answers?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1789
Writing synonyms in reading answers?
First of all, I would like to thank Ryan for taking this initiative to introduce this sub-forum. My question is related to reading section. Is it okay to write synonyms in answers of reading test? For example, in one of the reading tests in cambridge ielts 9, I wrote discounts whereas the answers ha...
- Sun May 17, 2015 9:24 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Can this essay get a band 8?
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2489
Re: Can this essay get a band 8?
Hello Terry, as suggested, I would view your essay in that 'hot zone': 7.5-8...as you would realize by now, IELTS examiners are NOT in a hurry to award higher level band results, partly because if an examiner is seen to consistently award highly they are called to account; their work is scrutinized...