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by terry3218
Fri Jun 19, 2015 4:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
Replies: 6
Views: 2354

Re: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)

Hi, In my opinion the letter does not address the question part "what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again"? . If you are allowed to sit in course for free , problem will not get solved, it is still there. Good use of vocab, but i am not sure "You see" is a c...
by terry3218
Thu Jun 18, 2015 7:10 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Is this a band 8 speech?
Replies: 5
Views: 11237

Re: Is this a band 8 speech?

thanks for the suggestions. I can understand why my voice sounds stressful and fluency suffers, It's because of I was trying to fit in a large speech in 2 minutes. So I'll try to relax a bit more next time.
by terry3218
Wed Jun 17, 2015 5:12 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
Replies: 6
Views: 2354

One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)

Write a letter to a college Principal, where you attended a one day computer course and are unhappy about the way it was conducted. Explain what was the type of the course, what happened and what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again. Dear Principal, I am writing to express my dis...
by terry3218
Wed Jun 17, 2015 8:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT task 1 .... PLEASE EVALUATE THE TASk..
Replies: 3
Views: 1261

Re: GT task 1 .... PLEASE EVALUATE THE TASk..

You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the Manager. In your letter • say what experience you have • ask what the work involves • enquire about conditions Answer: Dear Sir, My name is Faruqe Ahmed, studying in Hotel Management...
by terry3218
Tue Jun 16, 2015 4:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can anyone please suggest a band for this essay?
Replies: 0
Views: 581

Can anyone please suggest a band for this essay?

People today often buy new things instead of fixing the old things. Discuss the causes and effect of this.(what are the causes of this trend? What do they effect on themselves and others?) Ever since the genesis of industrialization, people’s lifestyles have gone through paradigm shift. This is evid...
by terry3218
Wed Jun 10, 2015 2:45 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: How many words are too much in writing tasks?
Replies: 4
Views: 1913

How many words are too much in writing tasks?

Hi, David, hope you're doing good. I just wanted to ask how many words are too much in ielts writing task 1 and 2? For instance, are 340words for task 2 essay are acceptable?

Regards
by terry3218
Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: [First Attempt Ever] Can anyone please comment on my essay (Task 2)
Replies: 2
Views: 618

Re: [First Attempt Ever] Can anyone please comment on my essay (Task 2)

For a first attempt, it's an amazing essay. You seem to have thorough understanding of grammatical mechanics such as commas,hyphens etc. Native speaker, I guess?

In my judgemtn this essay will get around 7-8 bands
by terry3218
Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:29 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Is this a band 8 speech?
Replies: 5
Views: 11237

Re: Is this a band 8 speech?

Thanks a bazillion, I will keep those points in mind while practicing especially about conclusion and pronunciation.
by terry3218
Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly critique my essay, target band 8
Replies: 2
Views: 1076

Re: Kindly critique my essay, target band 8

Hi, terry! It's been truly enjoyable to read such the elaborate writing! Indeed a good job! If you allow me to add some critique, please, note: 1) In 'Introduction' you never say what exactly will be looked at (I mean a brief content of your paragraphs is expected here or at least the main ideas). ...
by terry3218
Sun May 31, 2015 10:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly critique my essay, target band 8
Replies: 2
Views: 1076

Kindly critique my essay, target band 8

Some believe that global warming is the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Ever since the dawn of industrialization, world’s environment has been chan...
by terry3218
Sat May 30, 2015 11:52 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Differences Between Writing Task 2 General + Academic Topics + Answer Structures
Replies: 4
Views: 3763

Re: Differences Between Writing Task 2 General + Academic Topics + Answer Structures

I'm also curious about it. Let's hope some examiner shares insights on this soon
by terry3218
Sat May 23, 2015 6:42 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Speaking Section 2 (cue card) question
Replies: 5
Views: 2563

Re: Speaking Section 2 (cue card) question

David, I think he meant the simulation of real speaking tests/mock exams, which are available in abundance on Youtube
by terry3218
Tue May 19, 2015 7:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?
Replies: 6
Views: 1680

Re: Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?

Hi Terry, I guess you missed the "article" in both the sentences. ..and as [a] result enjoy a higher degree.. ..ever since the initiation of [the] women’s rights" (already pointed out by Matthews sir) Thanks! oh I see. Thanks for pointing out. I can't believed I missed it ;-)
by terry3218
Tue May 19, 2015 6:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?
Replies: 6
Views: 1680

Re: Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?

Hi thanks a lot Dr.Matthew. Since my target band is 8 that means I still need work.

Could you please tell me what's wrong with my this sentence?
" and as result enjoy a higher degree"

and this one

" ever since the initiation of [the] women’s rights"

Thanks once again.
by terry3218
Mon May 18, 2015 6:56 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Is this a band 8 speech?
Replies: 5
Views: 11237

Is this a band 8 speech?

Cue Card

Talk about a job that is important in your country. Please say

- What job is it?
- Who can work in this job?
- What skills are necessary for doing it?

http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/fi ... 7a48d08354
by terry3218
Mon May 18, 2015 6:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?
Replies: 6
Views: 1680

Would someone be kind enough to critique my essay?

Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. The topic of whether boys and girls should be taught in mixed schools has bee...
by terry3218
Mon May 18, 2015 5:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General training (Writing). Target score 7+.
Replies: 7
Views: 2021

Re: General training (Writing). Target score 7+.

Hi, don't you think '386 words' is too long? Yeah, I do. The thing is that it was my first essay and I just tried to express my thoughts worrying only about grammar and content and not paying attention to the length. I'll try to condense it and apply some of tips and hints from this forum. Thank yo...
by terry3218
Mon May 18, 2015 5:37 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my task 2 essay (Academic)
Replies: 3
Views: 1046

Re: Please evaluate my task 2 essay (Academic)

Nice essay. One thing though, Ryan is of opinion that you should avoid personal pronouns like I,we,our to make your writing sound more academic.
by terry3218
Mon May 18, 2015 12:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General training (Writing). Target score 7+.
Replies: 7
Views: 2021

Re: General training (Writing). Target score 7+.

Hi, don't you think '386 words' is too long?
by terry3218
Sun May 17, 2015 8:06 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Any comments and estimated band score please.
Replies: 6
Views: 11612

Re: Any comments and estimated band score please.

Nice speech, flawless fluency. And the best part (at least for me) was that you have a neutral accent, which makes it very easy to understand. I just have to say one thing about it. You said something along the lines of "government is well aware of this facility". As far as I'm concerned, ...
by terry3218
Sun May 17, 2015 12:57 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Writing synonyms in reading answers?
Replies: 2
Views: 1789

Re: Writing synonyms in reading answers?

Hello Terry, An excellent question to kick off with! The answer is that candidates must use the exact words from the passage in their answers. (This is the case in the example you mentioned.) If this is not possible (e.g. it would make the answer grammatically incorrect), the correct form of the wo...
by terry3218
Sun May 17, 2015 9:31 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Writing synonyms in reading answers?
Replies: 2
Views: 1789

Writing synonyms in reading answers?

First of all, I would like to thank Ryan for taking this initiative to introduce this sub-forum. My question is related to reading section. Is it okay to write synonyms in answers of reading test? For example, in one of the reading tests in cambridge ielts 9, I wrote discounts whereas the answers ha...
by terry3218
Sun May 17, 2015 9:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can this essay get a band 8?
Replies: 7
Views: 2489

Re: Can this essay get a band 8?

Hello Terry, as suggested, I would view your essay in that 'hot zone': 7.5-8...as you would realize by now, IELTS examiners are NOT in a hurry to award higher level band results, partly because if an examiner is seen to consistently award highly they are called to account; their work is scrutinized...