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by supriya
Thu May 01, 2014 2:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay by any Teacher or Ryan
Replies: 5
Views: 1110

Re: Please evaluate my essay by any Teacher or Ryan

Yes you are right!! Same thing i got it on my mind after writing the essay, If i have to discuss both the points so i need to make it like this: 1 supporting paragraph with positive impact of it and another with negative, Some what i was confused. But some body said me that in ielts if we follow on ...
by supriya
Wed Apr 30, 2014 12:33 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay by any Teacher or Ryan
Replies: 5
Views: 1110

Re: Please evaluate my essay by any Teacher or Ryan

Hi Flick,.
Thanks alot for your response and rectifying my mistakes, Even i did not know that i should keep space after comma. :roll:

Thanks once again. :D
by supriya
Wed Apr 30, 2014 8:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay by any Teacher or Ryan
Replies: 5
Views: 1110

Re: Please evaluate my essay by any Teacher or Ryan.

Please ignore previous post. on same topic Even though globalization affects the world economics in a positive way,its negative side should not be forgotten.Discuss. In present age,globalization refers to widening,deepening and spreading up of global interconnection,It is commonly seen that spectac...
by supriya
Wed Apr 30, 2014 8:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay by any Teacher or Ryan
Replies: 5
Views: 1110

Please evaluate my essay by any Teacher or Ryan

Please evalute my essay by some experts because i am going to write ielts on 10th of May,. Even though globalization affects the world economics in a positive way,its negative side should not be forgotten.Discuss. Do you agree or disagree. In present age,globalization refers to widening,deepening a...
by supriya
Mon Apr 28, 2014 2:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 971

Please evaluate my essay task 2

The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nuclear technology holds the promise of significant benefits, in a variety of fields, from ...
by supriya
Mon Apr 07, 2014 10:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2,,Kindly evaluate my essay.
Replies: 12
Views: 2930

Re: Task 2,,Kindly evaluate my essay.

Thanks alot chi,..
your way of writing essay is commendable,Can you help me out as i am appearing for my exam from china(nantong)Jiangsu.Please can you help me in my writing task???

Thanks and Regards
Supriya
by supriya
Tue Apr 01, 2014 11:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2,,Kindly evaluate my essay.
Replies: 12
Views: 2930

Re: Task 2,,Kindly evaluate my essay.

Hi Chi..
I liked your discussion about the grammatical aspects.Could you please evaluate my essay so that I can get a proper idea to present further essays in the coming days.

Thanks and Regards
supriya
by supriya
Fri Mar 28, 2014 8:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2,,Kindly evaluate my essay.
Replies: 12
Views: 2930

Re: Task 2,,Kindly evaluate my essay.

Hi Durai
Thank you for rectifying my essay and for your precious time though it was my first essay i will try my best to put some vacabulary and post it soon.
Hope you as well as other ielts member and teacher will help me to improve in my writing skill.

Thank You
by supriya
Thu Mar 27, 2014 12:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2,,Kindly evaluate my essay.
Replies: 12
Views: 2930

Task 2,,Kindly evaluate my essay.

Please evaluate my essay as early as possible and rectify the mistakes since my exams are approaching near.I am posting this essay so that I could improve my writing skills. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than seconda...
by supriya
Sat Dec 21, 2013 8:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: hi guys
Replies: 2
Views: 1455

Re: hi Delvy

Thanx alot for correcting my mistakes,i will go through with ryans link,which you suggested me,i will try to improve myself...Thanx again
by supriya
Thu Dec 19, 2013 2:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: hi guys
Replies: 2
Views: 1455

hi guys

Hi guys, I'm very new to this forum. i am planning to attempt the IELTS academic test in January. It would be really helpful if you can suggest improvements on this essay of mine. Question:some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rathe...