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by Claire3
Thu Dec 18, 2014 10:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: how am I supposed to interpret this question?
Replies: 1
Views: 673

how am I supposed to interpret this question?

Some people think that mothers should spend most of their time raising family, and therefore the government should support them financially. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples based on your own experience. If I want to agree with this question, should I write a paragraph on why...
by Claire3
Sat Dec 13, 2014 9:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: young or older employee! please grade my essay!
Replies: 0
Views: 456

young or older employee! please grade my essay!

Some say that young and energetic employees are more valuable for the company, others rauge that older people have more exrience and knowledge. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is essential for a company to be equipped with employees who can positively contribute to its business. Some arg...
by Claire3
Thu Dec 11, 2014 2:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please grade my essay!
Replies: 1
Views: 767

Please grade my essay!

Nowadays for many people the internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion about this trend? The contemporary society is progressed pursuant to the changes that computers generate for citizens. One of the new trends it has created is the re...
by Claire3
Wed Dec 10, 2014 10:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2-A (18/10/2014 IELTS - Asia Pacific)
Replies: 10
Views: 5969

Re: Writing task 2-A (18/10/2014 IELTS - Asia Pacific)

Hi! I've tried writing my own version but I'm not sure if this is a good essay. Hope somebody can grade it! In the contemporary world, peoples’ lives are progressed pursuant to the changes globalization brings to the society. It has thus become important for many to be aware of foreign cultures. Som...
by Claire3
Fri Dec 05, 2014 2:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: help! how should I edit this essay to get a band 8?
Replies: 1
Views: 545

help! how should I edit this essay to get a band 8?

Some languages die every year and English is becoming used more and more as a world language. Many people feel this is a positive trend and that world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people. Analyse both sides of this argument and provide your opinion. (sitting for GT...
by Claire3
Sat Nov 29, 2014 11:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please rate my essay! Task 2
Replies: 0
Views: 825

Please rate my essay! Task 2

Almost everyone agrees that we should be training children to recycle waste to save the Earth’s natural resources. Some believe that it is parents who should teach their children to recycle waste. Others argue that school is the best place to teach do this. Discuss both views and give your own opin...
by Claire3
Mon Nov 24, 2014 11:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please grade my essay! (general training task 2)
Replies: 1
Views: 645

please grade my essay! (general training task 2)

Is education the answer to stop people from eating junk food? Agree or disagree Junk food has been claimed to be a pivotal factor to the escalating obesity epidemic around the world. Some argue that educating the society is an optimal solution to alleviate this worldwide issue. However, it is believ...
by Claire3
Sun Nov 23, 2014 11:41 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: gap year topic! Please grade and evaluate!
Replies: 1
Views: 621

gap year topic! Please grade and evaluate!

Should young people take a gap year before university life? For some adolescents, taking a gap year off between high school and university has become an expected ritual for self-discovery purposes. They mostly utilise this time travelling or partaking in volunteering or part-time work. It is believe...
by Claire3
Sat Nov 22, 2014 7:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my task 2! I need a band 8!
Replies: 2
Views: 698

please evaluate my task 2! I need a band 8!

Should high school leavers take a gap year before attending universities? Taking a gap year off between high school and university has become a popular choice by many students. There are a number of common ways they utilise this time, such as travelling abroad, volunteering or working. I personally ...
by Claire3
Tue Oct 28, 2014 11:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: effects of business trip
Replies: 4
Views: 1151

Re: effects of business trip

Hi Allen! Hmmm it's an interesting topic. I've tried writing my own version of the question so hope this will help. :) It is not uncommon for employees, especially those in sales or managerial positions to be sent out on a business trip these days. Absence of a parent within a family could significa...
by Claire3
Mon Oct 27, 2014 10:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please comment! I need a band 8 for general training
Replies: 6
Views: 1843

Re: please comment! I need a band 8 for general training

And thanks for pinpointing at the concept of "stealing"!
I think the biggest problem with my writing is probably the way I formulate my opinions. They are sometimes quite irrelevant to what I need to talk about. :(
by Claire3
Mon Oct 27, 2014 10:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please comment! I need a band 8 for general training
Replies: 6
Views: 1843

Re: please comment! I need a band 8 for general training

Hey Allen! Thanks so much for your reply. I read your essay and it seems like a really good writing piece. :) I cannot believe that you only scored a grade of band 6 from when it appears to me that you have a sufficient ability to write well. I have previously set for IELTS three times, twice for ge...
by Claire3
Thu Oct 23, 2014 10:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please comment! I need a band 8 for general training
Replies: 6
Views: 1843

please comment! I need a band 8 for general training

More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only p...