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by npr.ielts7
Wed Dec 04, 2013 1:10 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Post your IELTS Nov 21 Results
Replies: 6
Views: 2475

Re: Post your IELTS Nov 21 Results

Here are some techniques I follow: For reading: for fill the gaps & T/F/NG type question. 1) First and the foremost thing, do not try to understand what is written in the passage. When you try to do it, your speed will go down. 2) Skim the passage quickly, do not take more than 1 -2 min for skim...
by npr.ielts7
Wed Dec 04, 2013 9:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Post your IELTS Nov 21 Results
Replies: 6
Views: 2475

Re: Post your IELTS Nov 21 Results

My third attempt score,

L : 9 R : 9 S: 7.5 W: 6.5

don't know what I should do now.
by npr.ielts7
Wed Oct 30, 2013 1:56 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Evaluate my essay
Replies: 7
Views: 4883

Re: Evaluate my essay

my version......... In today's world, the use of mobile phones is ever increasing. This trend is commonly seen in youngsters. It is agreed that the popularity among youngsters is a positive development. Analysing both the ability to communicate at ease with friends and relatives as well as the acces...
by npr.ielts7
Sun Oct 27, 2013 6:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay - increase tax on petrol
Replies: 0
Views: 3117

Please check my essay - increase tax on petrol

Some people think that the government should increase tax on petrol in order to reduce traffic and pollution. What are the advantages or disadvantages of such a solution? Today, pollution levels are ever increasing. One of the many reasons is burning of fossil fuel such as petrol. It is argued by m...
by npr.ielts7
Sun Oct 27, 2013 5:58 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay - mobile phones popularity
Replies: 1
Views: 1794

Please check my essay - mobile phones popularity

The popularity of mobile phones among young people is growing rapidly. Is it a good or a bad development? Give your own opinion and relevant examples from experience. In today's world, the use of mobile phones is ever increasing. This trend is commonly seen in youngsters. It is agreed that the popu...
by npr.ielts7
Fri Oct 25, 2013 6:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my letter
Replies: 0
Views: 1148

Please check my letter

You had purchased a toy online and upon delivery found that there was a problem with it. Write a letter to the manager of the toy company. - Describe a toy that you bought. - Describe why you think the toy is faulty. - What do you want the company to do about it? Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ...
by npr.ielts7
Fri Oct 25, 2013 5:54 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay
Replies: 2
Views: 2104

Please check my essay

Many people have to retire at the age 60 or 65. However, some suggest that these people should be allowed to work for as long as they wish. What are the pros and cons of this situation? Globally, the argument about when a person should retire is a topic of debate. Some countries have a fixed age fo...
by npr.ielts7
Thu Oct 24, 2013 2:41 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Rate my task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 1369

Re: Rate my task 2

bump
by npr.ielts7
Tue Oct 22, 2013 7:32 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Rate my task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 1369

Rate my task 2

Many people have to retire at the age 60 or 65. However, some suggest that these people should be allowed to work for as long as they wish. What are the pros and cons of this situation? Globally, the argument about when a person should retire is a topic of debate. Some countries have a fixed age fo...
by npr.ielts7
Mon Oct 21, 2013 6:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Rate my task 1
Replies: 4
Views: 2501

Re: Rate my task 1

Hello Delvy,
ielts-simon.com says that formal letter with no name should end with Yours faithfully.
delvydavis wrote: Instead of "Faithfully", I think "sincerely" suits more.

BR
Delvy
by npr.ielts7
Mon Oct 21, 2013 6:40 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Rate my task 1
Replies: 4
Views: 2501

Re: Rate my task 1

rephrased letter as per the suggestion. Dear Sir or Madam, I am a subscriber of your newspaper and I really enjoy reading the news items in it, especially articles in the editorial column. I must appreciate the efforts you put into research on the topic. However, there were some factual errors in yo...
by npr.ielts7
Mon Oct 21, 2013 5:03 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay
Replies: 4
Views: 1660

Re: Please check my essay

Hello Bunni, Thank you for your kind words. Band 8 is very far for me, cannot even get past 6.5 :cry: NPR.IELTS7 .. Your inditing is cool, simple and elegant... I suggest you should try for Band 8 in each buddy. Here is the crude one which took almost 3 hours to write. In this contemporary world, pe...
by npr.ielts7
Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:49 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Rate my task 1
Replies: 4
Views: 2501

Rate my task 1

You have read an article in a newspaper that contains incorrect information about your town/city. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper to inform them about the mistake. In your letter - Describe your knowledge of the city. - Explain what information was incorrect in your opinion. - Suggest...
by npr.ielts7
Mon Oct 21, 2013 7:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay
Replies: 4
Views: 1660

Please check my essay

Some people think that travel helps gaining knowledge but others think that TV and internet play a important role in gaining knowledge. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Throughout history, people with great knowledge are the most respected in the society. There are many different ways ...
by npr.ielts7
Fri Oct 18, 2013 1:33 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please correct my essay. Topic: Natural talent vs training
Replies: 6
Views: 4444

Re: Please correct my essay. Topic: Natural talent vs traini

Yes, I agree with you. I need to repharse opening sentence and rework on the conclusion paragraph in this essay Thank You, Praneeth I agree with you npr.ielts7. Question clearly states to discuss both the views before giving opinion. You structured your essay very well. However, I see some repetitio...
by npr.ielts7
Thu Oct 17, 2013 6:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please correct my essay. Topic: Natural talent vs training
Replies: 6
Views: 4444

Re: Please correct my essay. Topic: Natural talent vs traini

Hello ____,
Thank you for your feedback.

I don't think Ryan advises to write argument for a discussion essay.

Moreover, how can one write an argument essay when the question clear says to discuss both the views and then give your opinion?
by npr.ielts7
Wed Oct 16, 2013 11:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please correct my essay. Topic: Natural talent vs training
Replies: 6
Views: 4444

Re: Please correct my essay. Topic: Natural talent vs traini

I thought, I should discuss both sides of the argument and give my opinion. You have discussed both sides of the argument but as a reader I am not convinced why you are favouring natural talent over training. Why? Beacause your essay gives me the impression you find merit in both sides of the argume...
by npr.ielts7
Wed Oct 16, 2013 2:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please correct my essay. Topic: Natural talent vs training
Replies: 6
Views: 4444

Re: Please correct my essay. Topic: Natural talent vs traini

Bump..... Hello All, Please evaluate my essay It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talent, for instance for sports or music n and other are not. However, it is sometime claimed that any child can be taught to become a good person or musician. Discuss both these view and gi...
by npr.ielts7
Tue Oct 15, 2013 7:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please correct my essay. Topic: Natural talent vs training
Replies: 6
Views: 4444

Please correct my essay. Topic: Natural talent vs training

Hello All, Please evaluate my essay It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talent, for instance for sports or music n and other are not. However, it is sometime claimed that any child can be taught to become a good person or musician. Discuss both these view and give your op...
by npr.ielts7
Sun Oct 13, 2013 5:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Re: Regarding Reading Section
Replies: 5
Views: 3880

Re: Regarding Reading Section

Hello ____, I employ a different technique for paragraph headings questions. I will not read all paragraphs at once and match the headings. Instead, I concentrate on single paragraph at a time and answer. For, all other type of questions first i skim the entire passage. while skiming i will underlin...
by npr.ielts7
Sun Oct 13, 2013 5:37 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi Ryan i have my exam next week , guys evaluate my essay
Replies: 1
Views: 2542

Re: Hi Ryan i have my exam next week , guys evaluate my essa

My version on same topic... Universities are the breeding ground for future leaders. It is from these universities graduates will step into corporate world. It is believed that universities should groom graduates and make them ready for corporate world by providing required skills and knowledge. In ...
by npr.ielts7
Sat Oct 12, 2013 2:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay
Replies: 4
Views: 3156

Re: Please check my essay

Someone please correct my essay Hello Friends, Please correct my essay Some people argue that cars should be banned in city centers while others are against this idea. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion In today’s world, use of cars for commuting in cities is ever increasing. This can be s...
by npr.ielts7
Fri Oct 11, 2013 11:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay
Replies: 4
Views: 3156

Please check my essay

Hello Friends, Please correct my essay Some people argue that cars should be banned in city centers while others are against this idea. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion In today’s world, use of cars for commuting in cities is ever increasing. This can be seen by the sheer number of cars ...
by npr.ielts7
Fri Oct 11, 2013 8:11 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Looking for a practice partner for speaking and writing
Replies: 13
Views: 5628

Re: Looking for a practice partner for speaking and writing

Please add me, my Skype ID: npr.ielts7
by npr.ielts7
Thu Oct 10, 2013 2:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please rate my GT task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 1555

Please rate my GT task 2

Hello Friends, Please rate my essay. Nowadays many employers are hiring an equal number of men and women for work. Do you see this as a positive or a negative development? Give some examples to support your opinion. In twenty first century, equal employment opportunity is the motto of most companies...