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by tanzhaoxuan
Tue Jul 29, 2014 4:52 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi ! please comment on my essay and give me feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 1174

Re: Hi ! please comment on my essay and give me feedback

Hi Allen thank you for comments .I really like your comments and appreciate them.
by tanzhaoxuan
Tue Jul 29, 2014 4:50 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi ! please comment on my essay and give me feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 1174

Re: Hi ! please comment on my essay and give me feedback

Hi Argho .Thank you for your comments and I will work hard towards that area to improve my writing
by tanzhaoxuan
Tue Jul 29, 2014 4:46 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi!Please assess my essay
Replies: 1
Views: 497

Hi!Please assess my essay

Universities should accept equal numbers of men and women in every subject.To what extent do you agree with this statement? In recent years,the position of women in the society has always been a contentious issue.Women used to be denied of education in the past.This can be clearly seen in the Chine...
by tanzhaoxuan
Tue Jul 29, 2014 1:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi ! please comment on my essay and give me feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 1174

Hi ! please comment on my essay and give me feedback

In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? In recent years, the vast expansion of information and communication technology has made globalization a p...
by tanzhaoxuan
Mon Jul 28, 2014 5:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: For review please, Task-1 of GT
Replies: 2
Views: 577

Re: For review please, Task-1 of GT

hI i think it is good but try to avoid too much repetition of I at the beginning of a sentence.Try varied structure.Just a small comment,I think that it should be 'I have been called for an interview'
by tanzhaoxuan
Sun Jul 27, 2014 7:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please comment my essay .I badly need help
Replies: 1
Views: 469

Please comment my essay .I badly need help

In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? In recent years, the vast expansion of information and communication technology has made globalization a p...
by tanzhaoxuan
Sun Jul 27, 2014 7:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 essay
Replies: 1
Views: 478

Task 2 essay

In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? In recent years, the vast expansion of information and communication technology has made globalization a p...