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by hoangnguyen7x
Wed Jul 16, 2014 1:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Rate My General Task 2 Essay : 2
Replies: 3
Views: 3261

Re: Please Rate My General Task 2 Essay : 2

Some people say that self-employment is better than a job in company or an institution. Discuss, what is your opinion? Give reasons to support your answer Ans (practice with two paragraphs): There are some fascinating features of self-employed jobs that many people aim for. The most obvious advanta...
by hoangnguyen7x
Tue Jul 15, 2014 11:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...
Replies: 20
Views: 3584

Re: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...

Your essays are of very high quality to me, an IELTS learner. Thanks for posting, will refer to them as models!
by hoangnguyen7x
Sat Jul 12, 2014 10:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Paragraph writing - Women's jobs in goverment
Replies: 0
Views: 462

Paragraph writing - Women's jobs in goverment

I just exercise paragraph writing. Could anyone give me some feedback? Most high level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? The first argument to support more women's roles in government is that national governance critica...
by hoangnguyen7x
Sat Jul 12, 2014 12:08 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Edit Writing task 2-advertisement on children
Replies: 2
Views: 9519

Re: Edit Writing task 2-advertisement on children

Some checks as part of my IELTS study. Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think there are lots of negative effects on children and we should ban it. To what extent you agree or disagree? These days, advertising is an indispensable part of people's lives in the ...
by hoangnguyen7x
Sat Jul 12, 2014 12:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: essay editing--alternative energy
Replies: 2
Views: 6866

Re: essay editing--alternative energy

I'll give it a shot as part of my IELTS learning :). Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) is encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative dev...
by hoangnguyen7x
Sat Jul 12, 2014 12:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 3090

Re: Writing Task 2

Some paragraphs for the same topic, appreciate any comments! Thanks. TEENAGERS HAVE PROBLEMS AT HOME AND SCHOOL.WHAT DIFFICULTIES ARE THEY FACING NOW?WHAT SHOULD PARENTS AND SCHOOL DO TO HELP THEM? Teenagers often undergo some transformational struggling at their particular stage of life. Psychologi...