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- Tue Jul 08, 2014 2:42 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?
- Replies: 14
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Re: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?
Liked it. Few points, which I read somewhere, may help you - 1. In Para-3-Task 2 - Instead of "inefficient", it should be inefficient solution. 2. It could have been better to cut short the length of 3rd paragraph, as it was just detailing same idea. The additional time can be used as usin...
- Wed Jul 02, 2014 4:20 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 > Compulsory teaching of a foreign language
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4525
Re: Task 2 > Compulsory teaching of a foreign language
Although essay is good in terms of structure and vocabulary range, I personally felt introduction should have been more clear. Opinion and your stand should be clear in Introduction.
- Wed Jul 02, 2014 1:53 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Can anyone comment and rate my essay please?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1365
Can anyone comment and rate my essay please?
Can anyone check and rate this essay, please ? I welcome your feedback. In some countries, young people of eighteen years are allowed to do things such as vote, drive car, or marry. In some other countries they have to be older. What you think the age should be to take adult responsibilities? Every ...
- Wed Jul 02, 2014 1:51 am
- Forum: Latest IELTS questions
- Topic: writing questions 21st june INDIA
- Replies: 15
- Views: 7214
Re: writing questions 21st june INDIA
Can anyone check and rate this essay, please ? I welcome your feedback. In Some countries, young people of eighteen years are allowed to do things such as vote, drive car, or marry. In some other countries they have to be older. What you think the age should be to take adult responsibilities? Every ...