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by Johnson zhang
Mon Jul 28, 2014 10:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...
Replies: 20
Views: 3588

Re: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...

http://www.ieltsbuddy.com/images/ielts-task-1-fast-food.jpg This table illustrates the consumption of fast food among Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. During those years, both pizza and hamburgers were increasingly becoming popular among teenagers, whereas fish and chips were steadily decrea...
by Johnson zhang
Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:01 pm
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: Thank you ryan! I finally overcame the '7' barrier.
Replies: 4
Views: 10148

Thank you ryan! I finally overcame the '7' barrier.

I would like to officially thank Mr. Ryan for his help through his writing-improvement course. I had been struggling to obtain a band score 7 in the past ielts exams. In my last one happened in July, I finally received a 7 in writing! Although, I did poorly in reading which means I will have to sit ...
by Johnson zhang
Mon Jul 14, 2014 1:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...
Replies: 20
Views: 3588

Re: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...

You have a problem with a roommate. Write a letter to your roommate. In your letter • describe the problem • explain why you feel strongly about this issue • request your roommate improve the problem Dear Tom, The reason I’m writing this letter is to address the amount of noise you've been making la...
by Johnson zhang
Thu Jul 10, 2014 2:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Mark my essay I taking IELT test 2nd time due to Bad
Replies: 1
Views: 586

Re: Please Mark my essay I taking IELT test 2nd time due to

hi mate, not bad work i find this essay has one big weak area that is the fluency of it. a lot of your ideas seem all disconnected in attempt to be connected. Your choice of words are over the top. in fact, i feel like your ideas are too extreme the taste of Ielts. in other words, examiners don't ca...
by Johnson zhang
Thu Jul 10, 2014 1:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Is space exploration a waste of money!
Replies: 2
Views: 655

Re: Is space exploration a waste of money!

I like your essay, easy to read here are some comments all problems faced by earth? earth doesn't ''face' problems ...we are facing problems. ''many problems that have been baffling society at present. this process makes life easy? what is this? whose life? telecommunication is space exploration ? i...
by Johnson zhang
Tue Jul 01, 2014 2:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...
Replies: 20
Views: 3588

Re: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Many high school students take part in community ser...
by Johnson zhang
Mon Jun 23, 2014 9:02 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...
Replies: 20
Views: 3588

Re: Johnson's essays, aiming the highest score...

In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this ? What problems might this cause in society? Ans. Showing enough respect to older people is widely considered a valuable virtue. However, this act is increasingly losing its support ...
by Johnson zhang
Thu Jun 19, 2014 4:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my essay
Replies: 5
Views: 1614

Re: please evaluate my essay

very confusing
by Johnson zhang
Tue Jun 17, 2014 9:29 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: No access to YouTube? Download all of my videos here.
Replies: 18
Views: 28372

Re: No access to YouTube? Download all of my videos here.

sorta

stuck at 64kb......

have you tried to use dropbox hosting?
by Johnson zhang
Tue Jun 17, 2014 5:41 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: No access to YouTube? Download all of my videos here.
Replies: 18
Views: 28372

Re: No access to YouTube? Download all of my videos here.

Hi, ryan

Im using a mac in China and the download didn't work for me.
by Johnson zhang
Tue Jun 10, 2014 12:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please rate my essay and help me to improve
Replies: 3
Views: 848

Re: Please rate my essay and help me to improve

poorly written.

you need to get proper tutors

commenting your mistakes is hardly going to help. You know little about grammar
by Johnson zhang
Tue Jun 10, 2014 2:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...
Replies: 20
Views: 3588

Re: Johnson's essays, aiming the highest score...

Many of the medical problems that people are experiencing in today's world are due to the fact that we have a very sedentary lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Answer Today, many people have a heavy reliance on computers and technological gadgets. As a result, their lifestyles tend...
by Johnson zhang
Sun Jun 08, 2014 9:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...
Replies: 20
Views: 3588

Re: Johnson's essays, aiming the highest score...

With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. To what extent, do you agree or disagree answers Many countries are facing a number of problems they seem to be struggling to deal with. Funding is alw...
by Johnson zhang
Sun Jun 08, 2014 1:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...
Replies: 20
Views: 3588

Re: Johnson's essays, aiming the highest score...

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly . Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Ans. Many dream of making the learning process as easy as loading a computer program...
by Johnson zhang
Sat Jun 07, 2014 12:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...
Replies: 20
Views: 3588

Re: Johnson's essays

Q. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer ? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. Answer, Most people need a job and its income. Their employers may come in any size. It is interesting to see people's vari...
by Johnson zhang
Thu Jun 05, 2014 3:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...
Replies: 20
Views: 3588

Johnson's essays, aiming for the highest score...

Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sport or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Ans. Extreme sports are more popular than ever with a wide range of enthusiasts participating on a regular basis. Why would they intentionally put t...
by Johnson zhang
Wed Jun 04, 2014 2:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: test is on this saturday
Replies: 2
Views: 1009

Re: test is on this saturday

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by Johnson zhang
Mon Jun 02, 2014 3:10 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: T2 - nursing home
Replies: 10
Views: 4122

Re: T2 - nursing home

I would be happy if you all got a 7 or more. :)

My opinion stands the same, your guys' essay writing skills aren't getting better, stay about the same
by Johnson zhang
Mon Jun 02, 2014 1:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Written exam ---> practical assessments.
Replies: 3
Views: 11719

Re: Written exam ---> practical assessments.

In the modern world, there are movements away from written exams to practical assessments. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this trend. The methods of evaluating students have changed in recent years. Traditional written tests is being replaced by practical exams. This essay will take a close...
by Johnson zhang
Mon Jun 02, 2014 1:50 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: T2 - nursing home
Replies: 10
Views: 4122

Re: T2 - nursing home

hi durai, ,i know what you mean but I m not gonna do the work for him. I only want to give away my opinions. I think if you or allen zhang want some real improvement, keeping testing yourself on diff. topics is not gonna work out as you expected. I ve been working on my essays with ryan. The improve...
by Johnson zhang
Mon Jun 02, 2014 12:40 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: T2 - nursing home
Replies: 10
Views: 4122

Re: T2 - nursing home

Some believe elder people should live in nursing homes, other think they should live with the younger family members. Discuss both views and give your opinion. It is quite a controversial topic of discussion on whether senior family members should live with their children or go to a nursing home. Wh...