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Essay topic - Today the majority of children are raised by their grandparents, due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family? In today's competitive world when parents are busy accomplishing their career goals, children more often are br...

QUESTION: Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? ANSWER: An outstanding entertainer earns their popularity with their extraordinary talents. For this reason...

yes I lived in australia since young

I am sorry you're asking the wrong guy. I don't prepare Ielts exams (just do it) other than writing.
My writing sucks anyway....

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Not bad.

I guess it is always easier to write an essay about energy use.

try a harder topic .

Q. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. Answer, People work for a variety of companies of different sizes. It is increasingly normal that top companies would poach t...

Essay topic Number of companies that are selling their products worldwide is increasing nowadays. Does this phenomenon have more advantages or disadvantages? Write your view and share your experience. Applicant Response: As the international trade relations are improving and as the different countri...

Thanks allen zhang and durai. 1, all problems need funding to solve, thus governments' excessive budgets have been criticised. 2, those funding should be shared with other projects. 3, spot on comment on the topic sentence . 4, my essays tend to be written overly complicated. I am aware of the probl...

With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. To what extent, do you agree or disagree answers Many counties are battling a variety of challenges. Often, insufficient funding is assigned to tackl...

thanks

I ve reworked it

It would be very grateful if you provide cost of food per plate for 50 persons, not later than 18th june.

what is being grateful?

who is "you"

cost of food per plate for 50 persons. what?

No man....they aint' the same! original sentence: I am writing to inform you my decision to leave ABC industries when my current contract comes to an end next month. very good to do and when it is gonna happen My version: I am writing to inform you my decision of leaving ABC industry when my curren...

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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing, Does this trend make positive or negative effects to society. What do you think? ———— Among many difficulties that our societies are facing, it is believed that an ageing population would outrank well known issues such as glob...

Band 9 Samples from Graders Intro + Thesis: support A I am not sure you got my point. For ielts, there needn't be a thesis for a discussion! it means, intro + sides to be discussed + (optionally support for A) P1: support A because of the advantages P2: support B because of the advantages Conclusion...

I have a question about giving both viewpoints. In most of the samples, both view points are given despite the writer favoring one viewpoint. In the US, a rebuttal of the opposing point should come before the conclusion. However, in some samples, the writer only hastily refutes the final point in t...

Aslo, i think you missed the point of the test. I find it is very difficult to understand your essays , allenzhang. thus, i would give you a low score like 6 in a test.

Dave's this essay is good isn't 'cause he made few mistakes. it is 'cause it is effortless to read his essay. His ideas flow!

No allen zhang


I personally met two ABC who did the test in shanghai and got a 9 in writing .
there would be more

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors influence these decisions? possible answers are nudity , violence and political disturbance that could affect editors' decision Do we become used to bad news? maybe, people are losing interests in trag...

allen zhang,

this essay is actually very good despite that mistake. I wouldnt be surprised if he is a native speaker.

there are heaps of asians born or raised overseas in shanghai.

- Task Achievement (how well you answer the question) - Coherence and Cohesion (the layout, and ordering and linking of ideas in your letter) - Lexical Resource (use of appropriate vocabulary) - Grammatical Range and Accuracy (the accuracy and range of the grammar you use) Do you prefer to live in ...

Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. Please say - What have you learned while working for the company? - Did you enjoy working there? - What are your reasons for leaving? Dear Mr. David, I am writing to inform you my decision of leaving ABC industry when ...

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