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by candy07
Sat May 10, 2014 12:34 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi Please correct this essay and give me the band score
Replies: 4
Views: 1403

Re: Hi Please correct this essay and give me the band score

Hi Indian Harry

Many thanks for your detailed and scrutinized view on my essay
I will implement the suggestions , I have posted one more essay on changing careers ( in the previous reply you sent me a link).
Please take some time to go through the essay and give your reviews

Thanks again
by candy07
Sat May 10, 2014 12:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.
Replies: 12
Views: 3147

Re: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.

Hi I am posting a reply for this essay Please grade and correct it Change is an inevitable part of life . To excel in their lives, many people now a days change their careers and places of residence . It is agreed that changing careers is a positive development for an individual as well as for the s...
by candy07
Sat May 10, 2014 11:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi Please correct this essay and give me the band score
Replies: 4
Views: 1403

Re: Hi Please correct this essay and give me the band score

Thanks a lot for your time and effort . Can you please be more specific as to what changes are required in the last line

Thanks again
by candy07
Sat May 10, 2014 7:02 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi Please correct this essay and give me the band score
Replies: 4
Views: 1403

Hi Please correct this essay and give me the band score

Essay question - Many children today find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school . What could you think are the possible causes ? What are the possible solutions . The power to concentrate and ability to focus are considered to be the major attributes for the success of an individual...
by candy07
Sat May 10, 2014 6:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Attention first time posters!
Replies: 70
Views: 183158

Re: Enrich the writing forum by contributing to it

Hi Ryan and everyone

Please check my reading

Thanks
by candy07
Fri May 09, 2014 7:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Attention first time posters!
Replies: 70
Views: 183158

Re: Enrich the writing forum by contributing to it

Hi Ryan & everyone in the forum , My IELTS requirement is 7 bands in each module in the Academic test. Kindly review and correct this essay. If possible please give a band score and suggest areas where I need to improve. I will highly appreciate your effort. Thanks and Regards Essay question - M...