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These pie charts compare the percentage of most popular leisure activities in U.S.A. in years 1999 and 2009. It is clear that walking and jogging together constitute almost 35 % of the leisure activities in these years. In year 1999 and 2009, walking is the most popular leisure activity comprising 2...

The PRONUNCIATION of certain words was not clear in today's lecture.

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Supportive parenting ensures proper BONDING between parents and children.

Good writing
Ideas are easy to understand , excellent examples
Appropriate intro and conclusion
Flow is maintained in whole of the essay
Well done !!!!

QUESTION- A large number of deaths are caused by road accidents . Why do so many accidents occur ? Make recommendations that would help to reduce the number of road accidents . Write minimum 250 words. Response - Road side accidents are among the major causes of mortality all over the world. This is...

1) real
2) live
3) change
4) odds

We have organized a party to celebrate my little one's first birthday on 25th June. If you have already organised the party , then why u need information Rephrase it - I am planning to organize birthday party for my little one I am writing this letter to request information about a party room for a...

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Hi your essay needs improvement in many areas If you want to use memorized phrases in you writing please use them wisely . Old people need serious help in their daily life since the dawn of time . This will be shown by analyzing the existence of government and cheaper nursing. The existence of gover...

Hi guys
1) Please tell if this structure is correct
Intro
Bar graph paragraph
Pie chart paragraph
Conclusion
2) What amendments are required in terms of detailing and tenses

Thanks a lot

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year. Write a short report for a university lecturer describin...

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Thanks for your comments. I will improve in my next writing

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I need your feedback

Topic - Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements . Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people . To what extent do you agree or disagree ? Response - Young people all over the world are greatly influenced by media and celebrities. ...

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Give some comments

Hi
Sorry I forgot to write the question

The question is -

The use of machines are increasing day by day which is reducing physical work done by humans .
Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Advancements in technology have touched new heights in past few decades. This can be seen no where clearer than in increasing use of machines now a days. These machines reduce the physical work done by humans. Some people think that this is a positive development while others believe it to be disadv...

Privileged class
Elite class
Celebrities
High society
Aristocrats
Glamorous people

Well I am not an expert and I am really not sure about band score for this essay. Apologies for that

The use of machines are increasing day by day. Which is reducing physical work done by human. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantage? Technology revolution is replacing human beings in every sector globally. It is believed that, even though machinery assists many industries with...

Hi

Many Thanks for your responses .
I believe writing the cause and the solution in the same paragraph makes essay easier to comprehend, but I will try the other approach as well .
Can you please grade this essay according to band score

Chandni

QUESTION - You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you...

Hi all I am Chandni from Melbourne. I want to take IELTS Academic and score 7 in each module to practice as a doctor in Australia . I took IELTS exam once (General Training) in January and scored L-8.5, R-8, S-7, W- 6.5. I have joined this forum to get some help with my writing as I need 7 . I am pl...

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Excellent essay ... good ideas ... well stated...nice structure .. flawless !!!!