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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. answer The controversy around the competition is one the most d...

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Answer: The controversy around the genre rights is one the most debated society affairs. Some advocate, for instance, that college institutions should have a balanced distr...

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. "Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also r...

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning an...

Based on band descriptions given by IELTS facilities, I will try to rate your essay as part of my own study on the writting section. (keep in mind that I am not a native speaker) So, lets analyze the fulfillment of each item: Task response: Your essay adresses all parts of the task, however, some co...

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juve...

You should write at least 250 words. Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should write at least 250 word...

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending...

In my opinion, you already has achieved band 7.0

Look the band description given by IELTs, and you will notice that your essay fill the features of a band 7 essay.

Well, I will try to help you, however, keep in mind that I am not a native speaker. Firstly, your introduction seems nice, but the problem in the first pharagraph is with your thesis statement. Regardless of the general idea being related with the question, you should bring to this phrase some words...

I uploaded here a model of the answer sheet for those who want practice in real conditions. It could be usefull since you make a connection between the size of your text in the paper with the number of words. Relishing the chance, I will post one of my essays for evaluation. :D Question: You should ...

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Please could you check my essay about this hard topic? Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the import...

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Write about the following topic:
Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans.
Do you agree or disagree?

Please leave your opinion about my essay (task 2). Any corrections are welcome =) It is notable how new technologies are developed in a short period of time. Despite, there are many fields where these technologies are not enough evolved to substitute humans, one of these fields is translation made b...