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by IndianHarry
Thu May 01, 2014 6:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Question Regarding "Advantages outweigh Disadvantages" essay
Replies: 4
Views: 2804

Question Regarding "Advantages outweigh Disadvantages" essay

Hi, I often come across essay topics that ask you if you think the advantages of XYZ ouweigh the disadvatages. Do I have to mention both during my essay? As an example - In many cities, shops, schools, offices and homes will be developed widely separated. DO you think the advantages of this outweigh...
by IndianHarry
Wed Apr 30, 2014 12:00 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: IELTS 26/4/2014 Philadelphia
Replies: 5
Views: 3085

Re: IELTS 26/4/2014 Philadelphia

Is the writing task basically asking that these institutions are being built very far from each other?
by IndianHarry
Wed Apr 30, 2014 7:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic: Gender equality in University. Please Check and Rate.
Replies: 3
Views: 794

Re: Topic: Gender equality in University. Please Check and R

Universities should take the same number of men & women in each major. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Gender equality has always been a highly debated topic. This is especially true in the case of educational institutions that have gender equality as one of the cor...
by IndianHarry
Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic of respect towards old people
Replies: 3
Views: 5002

Re: Topic of respect towards old people

In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society? It is true that the contemporary world setting has resulted in less respect being shown towards the elders . There are several factors con...
by IndianHarry
Wed Apr 30, 2014 4:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Nuclear Technology - Threat or a boon?
Replies: 1
Views: 995

Nuclear Technology - Threat or a boon?

The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer. It was in 1948 that the world saw the advent of a weapon of destructive capa...
by IndianHarry
Tue Apr 29, 2014 8:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 972

Re: Please evaluate my essay task 2

The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nuclear technology holds the promise of significant benefits, in a variety of fields, from ...
by IndianHarry
Mon Apr 28, 2014 6:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: How to develop an idea:
Replies: 8
Views: 1441

Re: How to develop an idea:

If I had to correct this, it would be something like this. Firstly, children nowadays are already busy enough on their academic study , and their school work is just as demanding as a full-time job for adults. Thus, taking a part-time job will occupy their valuable time and impact their school perfo...
by IndianHarry
Mon Apr 28, 2014 5:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.
Replies: 12
Views: 3137

Re: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.

Thank you so much Ryan!
by IndianHarry
Mon Apr 28, 2014 5:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic: Gender equality in University. Please Check and Rate.
Replies: 3
Views: 794

Topic: Gender equality in University. Please Check and Rate.

Universities should take the same number of men & women in each major. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Gender equality has always been a highly debated topic. This is especially true in case of educational institutions that have gender equality as one of the core va...
by IndianHarry
Sat Apr 26, 2014 12:29 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls mark: Writing Task 2 Population overweight
Replies: 1
Views: 921

Re: Pls mark: Writing Task 2 Population overweight

Green words mean "It would be better if you do this". Red word means "There was a mistake". In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures cou...
by IndianHarry
Sat Apr 26, 2014 12:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.
Replies: 12
Views: 3137

Re: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.

Flick wrote:Hi Harry,

I would rate this essay around band 8 - your writing is excellent.
Due to misunderstanding the original question, it may drop to band 7, but you are doing a great job!

Flick
That Is pretty encouraging considering that I know I can do better. Thanks :D
by IndianHarry
Sat Apr 26, 2014 6:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: task 1 holiday
Replies: 1
Views: 520

Re: task 1 holiday

Dear Sam, How are you? Hope you are doing well. Over the last couple of weeks, I have been planning planning for a holiday trip to Australia, and the reason I’m writing is to check whether you would like to accompany me. As you know, I intend to go for a trip just to escape from the monotony of ste...
by IndianHarry
Sat Apr 26, 2014 6:15 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: IELTS Result Re-evaluation
Replies: 39
Views: 74332

Re: IELTS Result Re-evaluation

If you are comfortable with bearing whatever the cost for re-evaluation is, I think you should go for it. Its not that uncommon to get band bumps after re-evaluation. Know a few friends who benefited from this. Listen to your heart and go for it.
by IndianHarry
Sat Apr 26, 2014 6:10 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: IELTS writing Task 2 - Feel Suffocated with 250 words
Replies: 2
Views: 1168

IELTS writing Task 2 - Feel Suffocated with 250 words

Hi there I find it really hard to not reach 350 words while writing the IELTS essay. I can express briefly but never feel contented when I have to. In an attempt to bring down the word count once I've written an essay I end up harming the overall quality of the essay . I have no time issues as I usu...
by IndianHarry
Sat Apr 26, 2014 5:40 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: Module A 24 /04/2014 Melbourne NMIT Exam
Replies: 3
Views: 2381

Re: Module A 24 /04/2014 Melbourne NMIT Exam

Thanks a bunch for that!
by IndianHarry
Sat Apr 26, 2014 2:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: check and give me band score. Please :)
Replies: 2
Views: 837

Re: check and give me band score. Please :)

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it hard to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? It seems like everyone in the world wants to be happy. But each person has their definition of being happy/happiness which makes happiness hard to define. Personally, I think...
by IndianHarry
Fri Apr 25, 2014 5:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Need Band Score for this essay and areas of improvement
Replies: 2
Views: 891

Re: Need Band Score for this essay and areas of improvement

Very well written brother. I am particularly impressed with the appropriateness of the words you have chosen. Its been concise and to the point.
by IndianHarry
Fri Apr 25, 2014 5:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.
Replies: 12
Views: 3137

Re: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.

Can you make a guess of the band score this one will get, Flick? I'd appreciate that so much.
by IndianHarry
Fri Apr 25, 2014 5:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.
Replies: 12
Views: 3137

Re: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.

The good thing is I understand all the mistakes.
by IndianHarry
Fri Apr 25, 2014 5:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Ryan's Essay competition - Please check this Ryan!
Replies: 0
Views: 427

Ryan's Essay competition - Please check this Ryan!

Hi Ryan, So I saw that you had an essay writing competition. I've just joined. I was starting to watch your video of 50 best essays and before going any further I decided to write the essay myself. I'll go and watch rest of the video now. I'd be very grateful if you can rate and check this. In some ...
by IndianHarry
Fri Apr 25, 2014 5:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.
Replies: 12
Views: 3137

Re: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.

Thanks a Bunch Buddy. Had almost lost hope someone would help. I'll work on your suggestions.
by IndianHarry
Thu Apr 24, 2014 7:15 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.
Replies: 12
Views: 3137

Re: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.

C'mon Guys. Been waiting to hear from you for so long.
by IndianHarry
Wed Apr 23, 2014 3:30 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.
Replies: 12
Views: 3137

IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.

Now that I have written it, I think I misunderstood the question a little bit. Anyways, please rate this and give suggestions to improve. An increasing number of people changed their career and place of residence several times in their life. Do you think it is a positive or negative development ? Ch...
by IndianHarry
Wed Apr 23, 2014 11:01 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Help a brother out in IELTS speaking
Replies: 0
Views: 517

Help a brother out in IELTS speaking

Hi everyeone As the title says, I need a partner for IELTS Speaking practice. I am pretty good at the other 3 modules. Its just the speaking that I find hard to pull off. I haven't spoken much in English so I suppose its just an issue of hesitation and practice. I speak good English in my mind btw :...