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Hi John,

No need to disappoint, just analyse what's gone wrong and try to solve....everyone make mistakes , but only a few of them analyse and rectify it, I assume you are analysing person

good luck

Hi,

You misunderstood the question, they are asking what are the possible steps that governments can do to reduce number of poor people.

your whole essay is irrelevant,

It is truly evident that the presence of advanced technology in the schools has become so advance why advance again? you already said advanced technology that I would agree that in the near future, traditional teachers will be completely replace d . With the fast est growing technology such as the i...

Describe a film you didn't like.
You should say:
when you saw it *
where you saw it *
what it was about *
and explain why you didn't like it.

Hi Allen, 'rather than ' but is there anything wrong with using just 'than' ? discuss about them- is correct, but ' discuss them - sounds more concise. educational, education - both are correct the / one significant benefit , both acceptable. i should written ' to check student's clear understanding...

Describe something that is produced in your country

You should say:
what the product is
what it is used for *
how it is made *
and explain why your country produces this product.

In the modern world, there are movements away from written exams to practical assessments. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this trend. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Over the last few decades, the w...

Nowadays, many people believe that advertisement s convince people to buy unnecessary items that they not required required. While no comma this statement holds some truth, but we cannot completely rely on it. So, it is worth examining this view before reaching any conclusion. On the one hand, some ...

hi, its about your chidhood room, should use past tense...but you have used some present tense 3 minutes is too long, make sure you answer all 4 questions before end of 2 minutes, if examiner stop you and you haven't started the answered any question then lose marks for coherence. the above one look...

Hi,
your task response is good, you try to discuss both sides and gave examples which is good ;

but your word usage is poor, many errors using words in sentences, also with grammar errors...

read essay and know how different words are used.

above could be band 5.5 to 6

Is this is an IELTS essay, if yes, your band won't go more than band 3....

hi, again...too much words...around 270 ( size of task 2), would be able to write 270 + 430= 700 words in 60 minutes.
even if you write it may not do good for you...

anyway,

starting and ending are inappropriate for the task...

start with
Dear Sir or Madam,

finish with,

Yours faithfully,

Hi,

Too..too big ...around 420 words without conclusion...

and without it, your lose coherence and response to the task won't be fulfilled...

waht rob told is correct, try to do around 15 sentences, and you will get 270 words roughly, and that's the ideal size of an IELTS essay.

Allen, in regards to your correction; 1. 'Over the last decade' this phrase I found could be suitable to any type of essay to start writing, any topic if you see, doesn't look wrong. 2. i agree, we can use birth rate also, but i always restrict using more words in one sentence , i never go beyond 27...

It is true that due to the decrease of birthrate birth rate (2 words) and longer life expectancy, many societies such as Europe, Japan and China I avoid list of specific countries, are facing the problem of aging society. It is even expected that in some societies, there will be more old people (60 ...

It is expected that proportion of old people will be higher than young people in the future. Is it positive or negative trend? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Over the last decade, due to advanced medical facilities, individuals a...

In today’s world, the balance between the number of both male and female in several fields put here unclear, what is put emphasis means emphasis on the m a nager. Some people claim that all compan ies should maintain male and female employees adjective wrongly used equally. From my point of view, I ...

Hi Saravanan, Are you belong to Tamil Nadu ? I am from Coimbatore. Anyway, you need to follow exactly Ryan's model, means total of 15 sentences, stick to that, I am saying because of your poor knowledge in Grammar, your vocabulary is enough to get band 6, but only structure and grammar puts you behi...

Hi Allen,

For this essay, Ielts-blog gave me band 8.5,

TR and CC 8.5
LR and GR 8
overall 8.5

Its crazy , how can I get band 8.5, when I am struggling to get band 7.
Now I feel that this correction is waste of money..

Durai

hi, Its nothing about four or five, I suggested you 4 because, with such paragraphs you can achieve goof task response than 5 paragraphs, also you can limit your writing around 270 words with such approach. look at Ryan's essays on his blog, all of them are worth band 8.5 + but he used only 4 paragr...

Hi Sarvanan, In my view, this essay is not band 6 worth. ideas are not relevant, no paragraphing , many grammar errors , sentences incomplete, I would say , band 4.5 to 5 ( i am not an assessor) getting abnd 6 is quite easy, just Ryan's model. 4 paragraphs, intro, 2 supporting para's, conclusion ban...

Hi Allen, I was thinking the same after finished my essay, i was not satisfied, i know examples may not convince the examiner, I think if I take just one side and say for example, " there should be equal number of men and women at managerial posts" then I just talk about 1. need to give eq...

just a quick look...sathiya.. In this modern world, people are driven by money and material, striving hard throughout their life to obtain this what 'this' refer to? possession s to stay happily. Most of them do not understand the secret of being happy is through a well established relationship with...

Employers should ensure there are equal number of males and females in managerial posts in companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Feminism, a word tr...

In modern society, about half the waking hours are spent at work. As such, it is of immense importance to have a work environment that is fulfilling in all desired ways. This essay seeks to shed light on the components of a satisfying work experience and also to analyze the plausibility of no articl...