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Some people think that it is better to go abroad for holiday s , however , other s think that it is better to spend a holiday in their own country. you chnaged the topic, why holiday, even could be study, so stand on the topic It is agreed that travelling in own country has more benefits than travel...

Dear Suman, I w ould like to inform you that my leave application for my holiday has been approved by my manager. As per our discussion, you will be taking care of my pet dog and my home as well during my absence. its already given in the question, no need to mention again, also it sounds you orderi...

It is true that the usage of mobile phone s relat e to problems in different areas such as social, medical and technical. From my point of view, the disadvantages of mobile phone are on top of its advantages. On the one hand, it is no doubt that the mobile phone plays an important role in our daily ...

It is true that we all miss our childhood when we were playing all the time while having no responsibilities and worries apart from our homework. However, in some countries children are forced to work in order to survive and help their families financially . On the one hand, there are certain people...

I think, this question nowhere present in IELTS test except China Some metropolis nowadays are more spacious that makes public transportation the best option to move around. Considering the developed cities like Shangai, it is totally agreed that public transportation like the train is the best way...

You have a friend who is about to enter university and he wants you to advise him on which subject to specialize in-history –in which he is very interested, or computer science which offers better job prospects. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...

There are more benefits to travel in your own country than travelling in foreign countries. Do you agree or disagree. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Over the last decade, the number of domes...

Hi Allen, I would say this essay is band 8 worth. Because when I check with band descriptors, I cannot go below band 8 in any areas because of your grammar control and good choice of vocabulary. Well done... Keep producing like the same... If time is problematic, then keep producing a good essay wit...

Hi Allen,

Yes, in Australia, there are many real estate agencies who look for accomodation either short term or long term.

Allen,

Really, California, a state?

To be honest, I though it is a city, anyway, I will use a known city in my letter at test conditions.

I know short sentences are good, but if we want to good score in Grammar, a complex pattern is required.
What do you think about this?


Durai

Dear Kavi, I hope you are doing well. I have good news for you; I am inviting you for our family function in Canada. As you know, since last few months I have been trying to buy a new ( you cannot buy your own home) home, and finally, after a bit of hard work I bought it last week . To celebrate thi...

You are being sent on a one month work assignment in California. You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. In your letter: Explain the situation Describe the kind of accommodation you would like Provide the dates you will need it Dear Sir or...

You are being sent on a one month work assignment in California. You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. In your letter: Explain the situation Describe the kind of accommodation you would like Provide the dates you will need it Dear Sir or...

Nowadays, world economy is strongly influenced by the effects of globalization, with the improvement of transportation and communication. Reaching the other side of the planet was never this easy. However , there are also drawbacks that should be overlooked. This essay will ( avoid personal pronoun...

Hi Allen, Thanks fro your comments. I expected such mistakes: "Due to work-life balance" I was sure that this may not worded correctly as like " sense of approach" But, ' reading and word puzzles are given as an example, but the main topic is about leisure time to do different ac...

Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and doing word puzzles. Others feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. ---------------------------------------------------...

Hi Allen, ' As you understand', As you know, " are good phrases used in many letters, but I am not sure whether these are formal. With your wordings, you may score 7+. I tried to write this one in 15 minutes, I hope my letter is at least 6.5 worth. ( That's what I needed) I will post my essay s...

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter Describe the item you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do. --...

Hi Johnson Zhang, Thanks for your strong comments that we cannot improve our writing with such approach. But, I would say that commenting each essay gives the writer some knowledge of making correct sentences. For example, I learned many things from Allen's essay and he also commented that my essay ...

Hi Johnson Zhang, Please provide comments with a little more detail on mistakes because your comments don't make sense with one such word. If there is a mistake, please comment with your explanation, then only your thinking would reach us. I assume you understand what I mean. Don't take it hard. Durai

It is quite a controversial topic of discussion on whether senior family members should live with their children or go to a nursing home. While some people strongly disagree with the idea of sending their parents to a nursing home, however, I ( this one sounds easy to read) believe that this might b...

No Candy,

At present i am living in my hometown, Coimbatore India.
I lived in Australia from 2008 to 2013, now looking to get PR.

I am taking the test on 21st June.
Regards
Durai

Hi Allen, Thanks for your comments. I have something to say.. 1. ' package ' is a word similar to salary 2. I accept to use other synonyms 3. " To my mind, job security is also equally important as like money." i it ok now? 4.From Ryan's video , he explained many personal examples, one tim...

Neighbours play an essential role for living in a healthy neighbourhood society. H owever, in these days it can be seen that people are not much familiar with their neighbouring families.This common behavior among the people can be seen owing to certain aspects. explain what you going to do in this ...

There are many different reasons that can keep a person in their workplace. Some believe that money is the main reason. To what extent do you agree with this statement? -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...