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by delvydavis
Thu Aug 29, 2013 12:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT essay task 1
Replies: 2
Views: 2816

Re: GT essay task 1

Hi Ryan, Thank you so much for your comments. I do understand that all those silly mistakes must be avoided. About run on sentences & long sentences, I thought, if I create longer sentences which will give more complexity to it. I mean I was trying to make complex sentences to gain more weight. ...
by delvydavis
Wed Aug 28, 2013 11:03 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS essay contest results video
Replies: 7
Views: 4318

Re: IELTS essay contest results video

Hi Ryan, Thanks very much for the corrections. This is the first time, somebody gave feedback for my essay. I am appearing for IELTS in two weeks time. So, let me practice to the maximum. It would be great if you put another essay contest, by which we can learn from other's essays too. Thanks again ...
by delvydavis
Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:43 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay contest! Question seen in India 27 July 2013
Replies: 22
Views: 12353

Re: Essay contest! Question seen in India 27 July 2013

In this modern day, exploring the world aka tourism is growing. Many countries have adopted tourism similar to one of their major industries, through which they earn good revenue. However, there are harmful side-effects too. To start with, one of the major problems facing by tourism industry is accu...
by delvydavis
Sun Aug 18, 2013 3:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT essay task 1
Replies: 2
Views: 2816

GT essay task 1

Hi I am posting task 1 question and answer. Please correct it. You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: - Explain why you are writing - Explain why you have decided to leave the company - Tell your employer what you pla...
by delvydavis
Sun Aug 18, 2013 2:02 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: ILETS - AUS - Task 2 - General Training Question - 17/08/13
Replies: 2
Views: 2761

Re: ILETS - AUS - Task 2 - General Training Question - 17/08

Thanks for the topic.
Let me write an essay on it.

Delvy
by delvydavis
Sun Aug 18, 2013 1:55 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: New IELTS student on the board
Replies: 1
Views: 1925

New IELTS student on the board

Hi I am Delvy Davis. Basically from India, currently living in one of the Spanish speaking country - Dominican Republic. I am going to appear for the IELTS test on 21 September. MY poorest area is writing. Two times, I appeared, I got 5.5 both times, where I need 7. However, I have managed above 7 i...