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by adnanaadil
Wed Jan 20, 2016 2:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pressure on children - Task 2 - Please assess
Replies: 1
Views: 3954

Pressure on children - Task 2 - Please assess

Nowadays children are experiencing increased educational, social and commercial pressure. What are the reasons for this? What can be a solution to reduce the pressure? Children are the future of our society. As the world has been progressing, there has been many positive developments such as the ad...
by adnanaadil
Tue Jan 19, 2016 9:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay on things easily available - Task 2 - Give me your feedback Thanks
Replies: 0
Views: 1544

Essay on things easily available - Task 2 - Give me your feedback Thanks

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this has a positive or negative development? The world in the 21st century is slowly becoming a global village due to the advancement in technology. Advocates believe th...
by adnanaadil
Tue Jan 19, 2016 9:35 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 - Underpaid Workers - Exam on 23rd of January - Looking for Band 7
Replies: 0
Views: 1755

Task 2 - Underpaid Workers - Exam on 23rd of January - Looking for Band 7

SOME PEOPLE FEEL THAT CERTAIN WORKERS LIKE NURSES, DOCTORS AND TEACHERS ARE, UNDERVALUED AND SHOULD BE PAID MORE, ESPECIALLY WHEN OTHER PEOPLE LIKE FILM ACTORS OR COMPANY BOSSES ARE PAID HUGE SUMS OF MONEY THAT OUT OF PROPORTION TO THE IMPORTANCE OF THE WORK THAT THEY DO. HOW FAR DO YOU AGREE? WHAT...
by adnanaadil
Tue Jan 19, 2016 9:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay on Museums Task 2 - Exam on 23rd of January - Please Assess
Replies: 0
Views: 1875

Essay on Museums Task 2 - Exam on 23rd of January - Please Assess

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? Museums are an important part of our society, which represents our culture and focuses on our history. There are different types of museums, f...
by adnanaadil
Tue Jan 19, 2016 9:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Posting my second essay on task 2. Let me know what to improve on.
Replies: 2
Views: 528

Re: Posting my second essay on task 2. Let me know what to improve on.

Thank you for feedback David. I really appreciate it.
by adnanaadil
Thu Jan 14, 2016 4:57 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my Essay. Trying to get Band 8
Replies: 1
Views: 532

Re: Please assess my Essay. Trying to get Band 8

Hi David, I have some of the feedback that you have given to other writing tasks. I really like the points you have come up with. Would you give me an insight as to how can I improve me writing? My test is on the 23rd of January. I am really looking forward to your review. Let me know what I should ...
by adnanaadil
Wed Jan 13, 2016 12:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Posting my second essay on task 2. Let me know what to improve on.
Replies: 2
Views: 528

Posting my second essay on task 2. Let me know what to improve on.

Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your op...
by adnanaadil
Wed Jan 13, 2016 12:02 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my Essay. Trying to get Band 8
Replies: 1
Views: 532

Please assess my Essay. Trying to get Band 8

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Learning foreign languages is an art or a hobby for a few people; while there are others who learn it just b...