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by Xianz
Fri Jan 01, 2016 2:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task2 - Please kindly to assess my writing. thank you
Replies: 4
Views: 1137

Re: Task2 - Please kindly to assess my writing. thank you

Thank you for your feedback..

Is it possible for u to tell me what should i fill in for the missing word parts ?
by Xianz
Thu Dec 31, 2015 3:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task2 - Please kindly to assess my writing. thank you
Replies: 4
Views: 1137

Task2 - Please kindly to assess my writing. thank you

Consumption of the world’s resources (such as oil, fresh water, etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are these causes of the increased consumption? What can people do to reduce it? The world’s resources is divided into two categories which are inexhaustible (the resource will not run out i...
by Xianz
Thu Dec 31, 2015 1:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to review and give me comment about this writing. Thank you
Replies: 3
Views: 2076

Re: Please help me to review and give me comment about this writing. Thank you

Hello David,

Thanks for your feedback.
I will take note of that.

Best Regards,

Xianz
by Xianz
Thu Dec 31, 2015 1:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to review and give me comment about this writing. Thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 613

Re: Please help me to review and give me comment about this writing. Thank you

Hi David,

Thank you for your feedback.

Best Regards,

Xianz
by Xianz
Thu Dec 31, 2015 12:57 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly assess my writing. Thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 570

Please kindly assess my writing. Thank you

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. W-T1.png   The graph and table display the amount of water that was used worldwide by three different sectors, which are agriculture, industrial use and domestic use, from 1900 to 2...
by Xianz
Thu Dec 31, 2015 12:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly assess my writing. Thank you
Replies: 3
Views: 678

Please kindly assess my writing. Thank you

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The two maps illustrate an island’s preview before and after the construction of some tourist ...
by Xianz
Thu Dec 31, 2015 12:47 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi David, please kindly assess my writing. thank you
Replies: 1
Views: 469

Hi David, please kindly assess my writing. thank you

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The diagram represents the process of bricks manufacturing for the building industry. Overall,...
by Xianz
Tue Dec 29, 2015 2:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to review and give me comment about this writing. Thank you
Replies: 3
Views: 2076

Please help me to review and give me comment about this writing. Thank you

Many people are moving towards using debit cards (collectively called electronic fund transfer system or EFT) instead of the bank notes to pay for things. Carrying money electronically has more benefits than carrying money as bank notes. Do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, it is believed that all pe...
by Xianz
Tue Dec 29, 2015 2:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to review and give me comment about this writing. Thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 613

Please help me to review and give me comment about this writing. Thank you

In some families there is more than one television in the home, with each family member even having their own TV. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one set per home. In general, every single house has television as the price is affordable nowadays. However, some families h...