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- Sat Dec 26, 2015 8:11 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - SURVEILLANCE DEVICES
- Replies: 1
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PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - SURVEILLANCE DEVICES
Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disad...
- Thu Dec 24, 2015 10:24 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - CONVENIENCE FOODS
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1630
PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - CONVENIENCE FOODS
Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this notion? It is argued that due to the widespread of convenience foods, traditional cuisine and conventional met...
- Sun Dec 20, 2015 11:47 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - BAD STUDENT BEHAVIOUR
- Replies: 1
- Views: 657
PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - BAD STUDENT BEHAVIOUR
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Poor student behaviour is a major cause of concern in many schools across the whole world. There are several reasons which are responsible for this phenom...
- Fri Dec 18, 2015 2:02 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY REPORT - TASK 1 - PIE CHART ONLINE RETAIL
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1876
Re: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY REPORT - TASK 1 - PIE CHART ONLINE RETAIL
I'm sorry but I don't know why I cannot attach the photo. Is there any limitation for the photo's size?
- Wed Dec 16, 2015 12:18 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY REPORT - TASK 1 - PIE CHART ONLINE RETAIL
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1876
PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY REPORT - TASK 1 - PIE CHART ONLINE RETAIL
The given pie charts compare four different online retail items, including travel, film/ music, books and clothes in terms of revenue in New Zealand in the year 2003 and 2013. Overall, sales for each sectors varied through the two year surveyed. In addition, travel and film/ music were among the mos...
- Wed Dec 16, 2015 1:28 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 1 - THREE TYPES OF CRIME
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3624
Re: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 1 - THREE TYPES OF CRIME
Hi Sebastian, Thanks again for your kind reply. I just want to ask, is it possible to say "incidents of car theft were fairly stable during..."? I thought it is the number that is stable, incidents or car theft itself don't have trend. Therefore I always add number before them just to be s...
- Tue Dec 15, 2015 10:17 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 1 - THREE TYPES OF CRIME
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3624
Re: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 1 - THREE TYPES OF CRIME
Hi Sebastian, thank you so much for your kind reply. The first sentence: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012. is the topic sentence, not mine. I should have left a blank line there. I understand that my report is v...
- Mon Dec 14, 2015 4:58 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 1 - THREE TYPES OF CRIME
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3624
PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 1 - THREE TYPES OF CRIME
The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012. The line graph compares the numbers of three separate types of crime, including burglary, car theft and robbery, which happened in Newport city center between 2003 and 2012. Ove...
- Wed Dec 09, 2015 1:57 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - FAST FOOD
- Replies: 1
- Views: 411
PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - FAST FOOD
In some countries,fast food restaurants and companies give money to schools provided that the schools promote their products to school children.what do you think is the positive and negative of this in the development of children. Fast food is becoming the most prevalent type of food that surrounds...
- Wed Dec 02, 2015 7:58 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - A GAP YEAR
- Replies: 2
- Views: 654
Re: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - A GAP YEAR
Dear Sir David,
Thank you so much for your feedback. Could you please kindly point out my mistakes, I think one of my biggest challenges is that I don't know if I choose the appropriate word so it sounds natural to native speaker, and what types of jobs I should add as an example?
Best regards,
Thank you so much for your feedback. Could you please kindly point out my mistakes, I think one of my biggest challenges is that I don't know if I choose the appropriate word so it sounds natural to native speaker, and what types of jobs I should add as an example?
Best regards,
- Mon Nov 30, 2015 5:06 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - A GAP YEAR
- Replies: 2
- Views: 654
PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY WRITING TASK 2 - A GAP YEAR
Some students prefer to take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? After finishing high school, some students face the dilemma of whether to take a gap year for working or travelling or not. While there are several bene...
- Tue Oct 13, 2015 6:32 am
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: IELTS Study Partner Academic
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2436
Re: IELTS Study Partner Academic
smanning wrote:Hi. I will be taking the Test on 14 Nov and would like to have a study partner. We can do skype or whatsapp..
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