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Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 7:05 am
Q1. Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
Writing:
Relationship is build up through constant, concrete communications between each other. It is widely asserted that technology dramatically change peoples’ communication and relationship a lots all over the world.
On one stance, people could only communicate within a small community, such as neighbour lived in same village, workmates worked in same workplace,
by face-to-face talk or telephone calls. Nowsdays, people can connecte with others, like friends, kin or even strangers, more easily and instantly.
In the past, we could made an expensive long distance calls to family or friend abroad. despirt of that we could send a letter to them, it needed to take several days or even a week or month to get the response.
The advent of technology improves the way of communications. Firstly, you can make the internet calls to your family or friends no matter where and when you are with a reasonable cost. You can also get their updates instantly from social network. Neverthless, you can make new friends with other countries through social network without travelling to their countries. Also you can search information you need from the internet or share common interests information within the internet groups, forum etc . It is absolutely no doubt that Technology line up people worldwide.
Notwithstanding, we can enjoy the positive side from technology it bring to us. In other stance that people are widely adopted this virtual way of communication, they tend to not proactively to have a face-to-face talk or gathering with others as before.
Viewed as a whole, people can enjoy fruitful and rewarding relationship if they make use of the technology in a balancing way.
Writing:
Relationship is build up through constant, concrete communications between each other. It is widely asserted that technology dramatically change peoples’ communication and relationship a lots all over the world.
On one stance, people could only communicate within a small community, such as neighbour lived in same village, workmates worked in same workplace,
by face-to-face talk or telephone calls. Nowsdays, people can connecte with others, like friends, kin or even strangers, more easily and instantly.
In the past, we could made an expensive long distance calls to family or friend abroad. despirt of that we could send a letter to them, it needed to take several days or even a week or month to get the response.
The advent of technology improves the way of communications. Firstly, you can make the internet calls to your family or friends no matter where and when you are with a reasonable cost. You can also get their updates instantly from social network. Neverthless, you can make new friends with other countries through social network without travelling to their countries. Also you can search information you need from the internet or share common interests information within the internet groups, forum etc . It is absolutely no doubt that Technology line up people worldwide.
Notwithstanding, we can enjoy the positive side from technology it bring to us. In other stance that people are widely adopted this virtual way of communication, they tend to not proactively to have a face-to-face talk or gathering with others as before.
Viewed as a whole, people can enjoy fruitful and rewarding relationship if they make use of the technology in a balancing way.