One of me biggest social and Poustical challenges that people face is lenguage barrier. I belive that it can lead to many social and practical problems so, I partially Agree with prapost notion and reason for any inclination are trail Paragraph.
when people move to foreign language speaking couently if they don't know the "lenguage of that place then they can neither be social nor make friends as they are mot able to understand or Speak lenguage. Also it can affect their work efficiency because of not understanding instructions given by componey.
There are comparatively less practice problems caused by not knowing The language of County where your live because development in technology can make it easy. For instuence mobiles have made it easier to look disectioon, find important information and translation.
However, it is also beneficial For People to live in foreigon ,they have to learn new language leads to improve people's memory, problem solving ability and critical thinking skills, enhance communication, and ability to multitask.
On the close seruting, I conclude that living in foreign language speaking country can not cause problems if a person knows that lenguage otherwise it can create huge issues.
Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical p
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Thanks for your submission Anand1102!! Please see my rewrite below ...
One of me biggest social and Poustical challenges that people face is lenguage barrier. I belive that it can lead to many social and practical problems so, I partially Agree with prapost notion and reason for any inclination are trail Paragraph.
when people move to foreign language speaking couently if they don't know the "lenguage of that place then they can neither be social nor make friends as they are mot able to understand or Speak lenguage. Also it can affect their work efficiency because of not understanding instructions given by componey.
There are comparatively less practice problems caused by not knowing The language of County where your live because development in technology can make it easy. For instuence mobiles have made it easier to look disectioon, find important information and translation.
However, it is also beneficial For People to live in foreigon ,they have to learn new language leads to improve people's memory, problem solving ability and critical thinking skills, enhance communication, and ability to multitask.
On the close seruting, I conclude that living in foreign language speaking country can not cause problems if a person knows that lenguage otherwise it can create huge issues.
Hi Anand1102. There are a few problems with this essay and I will outline main ones below. It would take a long time to fix the grammar in this essay, so please just read the advice below, and try again with another essay. Also, don't give up, because you should be very proud that you made an attempt and posted it here on this forum!!
Advice:
1. Be very careful about spelling. There is a spelling mistake in every sentence, and this will lower your score a lot.
2. Be careful with capital letters. You must use a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence. Also, you don't need capital letters for things like "the language of the country".
3. Try to write longer body paragraphs of 4 or 5 sentences.
4. Put some time into studying the basic English i) spelling ii) punctuation and iii) grammar.
5. Read some of the other task 2 attempts on this forum to see how to do it properly.
Good luck and please try again!!!
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Thanks for your submission Anand1102!! Please see my rewrite below ...
One of me biggest social and Poustical challenges that people face is lenguage barrier. I belive that it can lead to many social and practical problems so, I partially Agree with prapost notion and reason for any inclination are trail Paragraph.
when people move to foreign language speaking couently if they don't know the "lenguage of that place then they can neither be social nor make friends as they are mot able to understand or Speak lenguage. Also it can affect their work efficiency because of not understanding instructions given by componey.
There are comparatively less practice problems caused by not knowing The language of County where your live because development in technology can make it easy. For instuence mobiles have made it easier to look disectioon, find important information and translation.
However, it is also beneficial For People to live in foreigon ,they have to learn new language leads to improve people's memory, problem solving ability and critical thinking skills, enhance communication, and ability to multitask.
On the close seruting, I conclude that living in foreign language speaking country can not cause problems if a person knows that lenguage otherwise it can create huge issues.
Hi Anand1102. There are a few problems with this essay and I will outline main ones below. It would take a long time to fix the grammar in this essay, so please just read the advice below, and try again with another essay. Also, don't give up, because you should be very proud that you made an attempt and posted it here on this forum!! Advice:
1. Be very careful about spelling. There is a spelling mistake in every sentence, and this will lower your score a lot.
2. Be careful with capital letters. You must use a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence. Also, you don't need capital letters for things like "the language of the country".
3. Try to write longer body paragraphs of 4 or 5 sentences.
4. Put some time into studying the basic English i) spelling ii) punctuation and iii) grammar.
5. Read some of the other task 2 attempts on this forum to see how to do it properly.
Good luck and please try again!!!
