Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2
Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2016 8:24 am
Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, our environment faces a huge extinction of unique and different kinds of species due to the irresponsible human activities. in the following paragraphs we will discuss the main causes of loss of biodiversity and possible solutions of this problem.
The two main causes of species extinction are dangerous chemicals and toxic waste which factories produce and the overexploitation of natural resources. Government doesn’t apply strict laws on factories building sites. As a result factories are built in areas thats closer to natural forces where are homes for many endangers species and such an act puts species lives in danger. For instance, the toxic waste that comes out of factories pollute the clean air of the forest. Because of that animal will hardly breath and leads into slow and painful death. Also, when people use extensively natural resources of a particular area, the resources becomes exhausted. For example, too frequent hunting of animals doesn’t allow animals to reproduce and makes them disappear.
There are many possible solution of this problem. One of them is to apply more strict laws and another one is to protect areas. Firstly government should apply more strict law to forbidden any civilian or industrial building near 100 meter radius of any natural forest. Therefore, species will have much more cleaner and fresher air. Secondly, protecting areas limits human activities and avoid overexploitation of resources. so we will have more untouched lands and much more less loss of endangered species.
To summarise, the wrongful acts of individuals lead into negative consequences that harms our ecosystem. however, recommended solutions to overcome this issue are by applying more firm laws and protect area where endangered species live.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, our environment faces a huge extinction of unique and different kinds of species due to the irresponsible human activities. in the following paragraphs we will discuss the main causes of loss of biodiversity and possible solutions of this problem.
The two main causes of species extinction are dangerous chemicals and toxic waste which factories produce and the overexploitation of natural resources. Government doesn’t apply strict laws on factories building sites. As a result factories are built in areas thats closer to natural forces where are homes for many endangers species and such an act puts species lives in danger. For instance, the toxic waste that comes out of factories pollute the clean air of the forest. Because of that animal will hardly breath and leads into slow and painful death. Also, when people use extensively natural resources of a particular area, the resources becomes exhausted. For example, too frequent hunting of animals doesn’t allow animals to reproduce and makes them disappear.
There are many possible solution of this problem. One of them is to apply more strict laws and another one is to protect areas. Firstly government should apply more strict law to forbidden any civilian or industrial building near 100 meter radius of any natural forest. Therefore, species will have much more cleaner and fresher air. Secondly, protecting areas limits human activities and avoid overexploitation of resources. so we will have more untouched lands and much more less loss of endangered species.
To summarise, the wrongful acts of individuals lead into negative consequences that harms our ecosystem. however, recommended solutions to overcome this issue are by applying more firm laws and protect area where endangered species live.