jesus wrote: ↑Thu Jun 25, 2015 10:09 am
The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of
the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the
fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In today’s world, women
have become highly involved in
work activities:
careers and business, rather than staying home and looking after their children. However,
this is seen
by some as the major cause of improper child care. It is disagreed that working women are entirely responsible
for the problems encountered by youths. This will be proven by analyzing the availability of child care facilities and the optimal balance between family life and working life.
Firstly, there are numerous child care institutions and day nurseries
available, which removes much of the obligation of
a mother
to her children. For example, many cities in Nepal, Kathmandu and Pokhara in particular,
run several child care schools: Mountain kindergarten; Sandeep children
's home; Lakeside child house. If young people are admitted
to these schools, it will definitely
ease some of the responsibilities for child rearing that used to fall on mothers. What this means is that
not only women are responsible for the proper care of
their child.
Additionally, despite working outside the home to improve financial status, adults females can
still provide satisfying care to their children.
Carrying out part time work and being available for their children before and after school embodies this idea perfectly. Therefore, through
this course of actio
n, women can create
a plausible balance between working life and family life. As a ramification, mothers should not be denounced for the difficulties of young people.
After evaluating the
availability of child care facilities an
d the perfect balance between family life and working life, it is apparent that the working pattern adopted by women is reasonable,
and criticizing adult females for bad habits of youths is preposterous. It is thus hoped that women will be entirely respected for their good deeds
with their children by practicing the
solutions mentioned in this essay.
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