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Advice please exam on 29

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


It is often argued that parents are best teachers for their children, while others believe that schools should teach them how to be ideal members in their society. This essay discuss that despite parents are best models for their kids, well-trained teachers can do this role perfectly.

In the one hand, many people think that children gain most of experiences and behaviors from their parents because they spend most of their time with them. It is also noted that most of child’s attitudes are somehow considered an imitation to their parents’. For example, children for aggressive parents are usually noticed to behave aggressively at a very young age. However, I would argue that this should not be the rule otherwise we will have children looks as copies of their parents with masked personality.

On the other hand, some people presume that modern educational methods may play a great role in formatting students’ behavior. In these new techniques, teachers are trained to deal with different students’ needs with good understanding of various students’ personalities, they are not only looking after academic sciences, but also give a chance to raise morals and sense of community respect. In addition, teachers can enforce these habits through encouraging competitions among peers, this method is always successful in young age. For instance, most schools are running nowadays ceremonies for rewarding good social manners such as best class in cleanness and teamwork. This motivate children to do their best showing their behavior. Therefore, nobody can neglect school impact in raising children.

To conclude, although parents are the main educators for their children, I believe schools can do this role easier.
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raghadmamd wrote: Wed Apr 26, 2017 4:58 pm Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


It is often argued that parents are best teachers for their children, while others believe that schools should teach them how to be ideal members of society. This essay considers that despite parents being the best role models for their kids, well-trained teachers can also fulfill this role.

On the one hand, many people think that children gain most experiences and behaviors from their parents because they spend most of their time with them. It is also noted that most of a child’s attitudes are somehow considered an imitation of their parents’. For example, children of aggressive parents are usually noticed to behave aggressively at a very young age. However, I would argue that this should not be the rule, otherwise we will have children looks as copies of their parents with masked personality.(<--I don't understand this sentence. What is a masked personality?)

On the other hand, some people presume that modern educational methods may play a large role in molding students’ behavior. In these new techniques, teachers are trained to deal with different students’ needs with good understanding of various students’ personalities. Teachers are not only looking after academic studies, but also focus on building morals and a sense of community respect. In addition, teachers can enforce these habits through encouraging competition among peers. This method is always successful at a young age. For instance, most schools nowadays have ceremonies for rewarding good social manners such as best class in cleanliness and teamwork. This motivates children to do their best. Therefore, nobody can ignore the impact school has in raising children.

To conclude, although parents are the main educators for their children, I believe schools can do this role easier.
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