money and happiness...my first speaking part 3

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zibs
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money and happiness...my first speaking part 3

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David.IELTS.Examiner
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Re: money and happiness...my first speaking part 3

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Hello!

Fluency - Some pauses and speech is a little slow. Needs some work.

Coherence - Very good range of connectives used correctly. Sentence order could be better in these long answers.

Vocabulary - Good range with some nice details. This is your best area, in my opinion.

Grammar - Good range of structures, often used correctly. Well done!

Pronunciation - Generally clear, but not much stress and intonation. Needs quite a lot of work.

All the best,
David
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Re: money and happiness...my first speaking part 3

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I think that you need to work on every aspect except coherence in order to achieve a high score.
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Re: money and happiness...my first speaking part 3

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The Ry them is causing issues in your speaking. If you speak few words, then pause and collect your thoughts, color your language, you will improve significantly.
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