An important historical event to your country

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Xbb
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An important historical event to your country

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Cue card:
Describe a historical event to your country.
- When was the event?
- When and where it took place?
- Why this event was important to your country history?
Explain why you still remember it.
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David.IELTS.Examiner
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Re: An important historical event to your country

Post by David.IELTS.Examiner »

Hello!

Fluency - Quite a lot of pauses and speech is quite slow

Coherence - Good use of a range of connectives

Vocabulary - Reasonable with some details

Grammar - Good basic grammar with some good complex structures

Pronunciation - Clear, but almost no stress and intonation

Overall, I would suggest working on fluency and pronunciation.

All the best,
David
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Re: An important historical event to your country

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Appreciation for your reviewing efforts, David!!
All the best,
Xbb
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