please evaluate my speaking part1 thanks

Daily (Mon-Fri) speech exercises with Ryan through Whatsapp
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tinalongmao
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please evaluate my speaking part1 thanks

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There are several questions from part1 (using of mobile):
1. Is mobile phone important for you in your daily life?
2. Has mobile phone developed in the past few years?
3. What feature of your mobile do you like the best?
4. Is there anything you dislike about using cell phones?
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David.IELTS.Examiner
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Re: please evaluate my speaking part1 thanks

Post by David.IELTS.Examiner »

Hello again!

Fluency - Good overall, but some 'stuttering'. As the speech is a little fast in parts, it isn't always clear how you move from point to point (This also affects coherence)

Coherence - Good use of a range of connectives

Vocabulary - Good with some details

Grammar - Quite a lot of basic errors, but a reasonable range of structures are used

Pronunciation - Clear with some stress and intonation

Advice: Get speed under control and work on basic grammar

All the best,
David
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