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by ali15
Sat Sep 24, 2016 8:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review my essay task 2
Replies: 6
Views: 1253

Re: please review my essay task 2

Thank you :D
by ali15
Wed Sep 14, 2016 9:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review my essay task 2
Replies: 6
Views: 1253

Re: please review my essay task 2

Dear Daivd i would like you to assist me with that:

- Is my essay easy to understand?

-How is my essay structure format?

- my cohesion and coherence?

- grammar and vocabulary?

-what band do give me for it?

- Last some advice :D

Thank you
by ali15
Wed Sep 14, 2016 9:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review my essay task 2
Replies: 6
Views: 1253

Re: please review my essay task 2

Dear David Thank you for replying..... regarding to your first question it is agreed...who by?. The answer is by me because the question ask do you agree or disagree, i gave two practical points and i support it with two example that i experienced. For your second question...... You mention discussi...
by ali15
Thu Sep 08, 2016 4:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review my essay task 2
Replies: 6
Views: 1253

please review my essay task 2

Some people think distance-learning programmes can never be as good as courses taken in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays the world is witnessing a huge development in teaching methods. This can be seen where students can chose between distance learning and conventional learn...
by ali15
Thu Sep 08, 2016 3:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hello...please review my essay
Replies: 0
Views: 2092

Hello...please review my essay

Some people think distance-learning programmes can never be as good as courses taken in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays the world is witnessing a huge development in teaching methods. This can be seen where students can chose between distance learning and conventional learn...
by ali15
Mon Aug 01, 2016 9:58 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review my essay task 2
Replies: 6
Views: 1480

Re: please review my essay task 2

Thank you Flick for checking my essay i really appreciate that, from the above essay i can see that i am very weak on grammar and i need to work hard with it. From my essay could you tell me that is my introduction, 2 body paragraph and conclusion are ok or do i need to improve them, also the 2 poin...
by ali15
Sat Jul 23, 2016 8:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review my essay task 2
Replies: 6
Views: 1480

Re: please review my essay task 2

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Since the dawn of time people are more concerned of developing their conventional skills and lifestyle, this ...
by ali15
Sat Jul 23, 2016 8:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review my essay task 2
Replies: 6
Views: 1480

Re: please review my essay task 2

Thank you David for reviewing my essay, in fact that was my first writing attempt and i can see that i need to practice more especially on reasoning, grammar and vocabulary. today i wrote an essay and i really worked hard with it so please review it for many and give me some instruction. thank you a...
by ali15
Tue Jul 19, 2016 12:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Attention first time posters!
Replies: 70
Views: 175264

Re: Enrich the writing forum by contributing to it

Hello people pls help me with this essay and thnx you :) Universities should allocate the same amount of money to their sport activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree or disagree? Today money is playing an important part in people live, this can be seen on the way of how these pe...
by ali15
Tue Jul 19, 2016 12:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review my essay task 2
Replies: 6
Views: 1480

please review my essay task 2

Universities should allocate the same amount of money to their sport activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree or disagree? Today money is playing an important part in people live, this can be seen on the way of how these people or organization spend this money carefully, it is ag...
by ali15
Mon Jul 20, 2015 9:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay
Replies: 0
Views: 856

Please check my essay

As the number of private cars has increased, so too has the level of pollution in many cities. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem? Nowadays most of the major cities are crowded with huge number of automobiles. these cars are designed with engine that use oil or gas to power ...