I would add one point for improvement
The length of second paragraph is shorter
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- Mon Mar 13, 2017 7:03 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2. The subway (attempt 3). Please evaluate
- Replies: 4
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- Mon Mar 13, 2017 7:02 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Could you give your feedback on my essay task 2. Thanks a lot!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1907
Re: Could you give your feedback on my essay task 2. Thanks a lot!
I suggest you can bring tremendous improvements by just following up Ryan structure. Let me know if you need link of relevant videos.
- Sat Mar 04, 2017 5:38 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please Asses My Task 2 General Writing. Thank You!
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2250
Re: Please Asses My Task 2 General Writing. Thank You!
Question: Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single . Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Answe...
- Sat Mar 04, 2017 5:31 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please Evaluate my Task 2
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1595
Re: Please Evaluate my Task 2
1. There are minor issues with the structure. If you check Ryan guidelines on essays structure, you will improve a lot. For example, the conclusions paragraph should have few more lines. 2. You should not use Firstly, Secondly etc. This type of structure is used for the essays where we support one a...
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:19 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Please check my speaking task 2
- Replies: 1
- Views: 8287
Re: Please check my speaking task 2
Stay on the topic
Take a bit long pauses between sentences so that you can plan before you speak and avoid grammar mistakes.
Take a bit long pauses between sentences so that you can plan before you speak and avoid grammar mistakes.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:17 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Please review my speaking task 2.
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7687
Re: Please review my speaking task 2.
The second and third part of the topic was not addressed properly.
5.5
5.5
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:15 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Plz asses my speaking
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7643
Re: Plz asses my speaking
The recording is empty
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:14 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Plz asses my speaking
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7566
Re: Plz asses my speaking
The basic problem is getting away from the topic.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:13 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: please check my speaking
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7189
Re: please check my speaking
I inferred that the recording does not exist anymore.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:12 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Please check my speaking (Praoparn2)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7648
Re: Please check my speaking (Praoparn2)
You need to have long pauses between sentences so that you can think before you speak. This tactics would improve your speaking
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:10 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Please evaluate my speaking part 1 and 2
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8027
Re: Please evaluate my speaking part 1 and 2
You try to speak very fast which is affecting your pronunciation.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:08 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: please check my speaking
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7465
Re: please check my speaking
Nothing posted.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:07 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Crime - Please Assess This Task 2 Essay
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2634
Re: Crime - Please Assess This Task 2 Essay
As a first step of improvement, you need to follow Ryan structure of essay.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:47 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 1 Essay - Please evaluate
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1206
Re: Task 1 Essay - Please evaluate
you recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. write a letter to your friend. in your letter: ask your friend to send you on of the photographs, explain why you need that particular photograph; and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it. Dear Sarah, Hope yo...
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:43 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: General Task 1. Airport. Please evaluate
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1884
Re: General Task 1. Airport. Please evaluate
You missed the flight.
Its off the topic.
Its off the topic.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:40 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: I would like to kindly ask you to asses this task 2. Thank you in advance!
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1397
Re: I would like to kindly ask you to asses this task 2. Thank you in advance!
Structure of essay is key. You can improve a lot if you spend few hours on structure taught by Ryan. Check his Youtube videos.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:39 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 (Academic)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1339
Re: Task 2 (Academic)
The second paragraph is shorter. The introductions paragraph need more clarity
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:38 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Kindly evaluate my essay
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1495
Re: Kindly evaluate my essay
Grammar need a lot of improvement
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:37 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please correct my essay, task2 (academic)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1186
Re: please correct my essay, task2 (academic)
Please check Ryan guidelines for Essay writing. The essay need a lot of improvement.
Once you start following the Ryan structure, it will improve a lot. After memorizing structure, you need to work on sentence structure.
Once you start following the Ryan structure, it will improve a lot. After memorizing structure, you need to work on sentence structure.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:34 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1214
Re: Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
Sentence structures need to be improved. The essay has clear problem with colloquialism.
If its not clear, I can re-write the essay for your guidance.
If its not clear, I can re-write the essay for your guidance.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:32 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please assess my Task 2 General Writing. Thank You!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1349
Re: Please assess my Task 2 General Writing. Thank You!
Here are my comments. I can re-write the essay, if you ask.
1. Its a bit off the topic. Please think a bit about topic, scope ( write it on paper) and keywords before you start your sentence. Its always best to plan essay.
2. Coherence. Most of the sentence are not in flow.
Almost 5.5 band
1. Its a bit off the topic. Please think a bit about topic, scope ( write it on paper) and keywords before you start your sentence. Its always best to plan essay.
2. Coherence. Most of the sentence are not in flow.
Almost 5.5 band
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 9:46 am
- Forum: Post your success story
- Topic: 8 on IELTS General
- Replies: 2
- Views: 9143
Re: 8 on IELTS General
Tarun, you are done with the toughest parts of the exams where you need assistance of others. The reading section need practice only which you can do yourself.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 9:43 am
- Forum: Post your success story
- Topic: My result on 21.01.2017
- Replies: 1
- Views: 8299
Re: My result on 21.01.2017
I suggest you to practice toughest questions only. Identify your weak areas.
You will get band 7 in exams only after you start achieving band 8 in your practices at home.
You will get band 7 in exams only after you start achieving band 8 in your practices at home.
- Thu Mar 02, 2017 12:57 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Communication Essay - Evaluation Appreciated
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2426
Re: Communication Essay - Evaluation Appreciated
Try to re-write it again.
Come up with relevant example and equalize the paragraphs in length
Come up with relevant example and equalize the paragraphs in length
- Thu Mar 02, 2017 12:17 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: IELTS GT Task 1: Comments pls
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2180
Re: IELTS GT Task 1: Comments pls
Please point out 3-4 sentences that are out of topic. After it, I will guide you again for improvement in vocabulary and sentence structure.