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by terry3218
Mon Apr 09, 2018 11:13 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Are there any measures to minimise subjectivity in writing grading?
Replies: 0
Views: 27639

Are there any measures to minimise subjectivity in writing grading?

Hi,
I think we all can agree that ielts writing is highly subjective when it comes to grading, but are there any measures in place to minimise this subjectivity when writing is being marked?
by terry3218
Wed Feb 28, 2018 10:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please check it. .. R
Replies: 2
Views: 13635

Re: please check it. .. R

Not bad I believe. A solid 6.5 range essay in my opinion. What band are you looking for?
by terry3218
Wed Feb 28, 2018 10:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 general feedback needed
Replies: 1
Views: 15879

Task 1 general feedback needed

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter  Say where you think you left the papers  Explain why they are so important  Tell the manager what you want him...
by terry3218
Sat Feb 24, 2018 4:58 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Please assess my speaking. Task 2
Replies: 0
Views: 29462

Please assess my speaking. Task 2

Part 2 – Cue Card

Describe a sport you would like to learn. Please say:

– What sport it is?

– When will you learn it?

– How will you learn it?

– Why do you want to learn this particular sport?

 Please also suggest what band you think I'd get with this speech?
by terry3218
Mon Jul 20, 2015 1:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique my letter
Replies: 11
Views: 4149

Re: Please critique my letter

Hi terry3218, I just have one short little comment on clearity. you are inviting some friends to a party, and suddenly out of the blue you are having an exam? It does not fit with the rest of the text this is the setence I'm refering to: For the court has ordered my employer to allow me to take 15 ...
by terry3218
Mon Jul 20, 2015 1:49 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique my letter
Replies: 11
Views: 4149

Re: Please critique my letter

Hi I will look at a few parts of this letter to help. Dear John, Hi John I hope this letter finds you in good spirits. How are you? Are you feeling refreshed after your trip? I hope you had a really good holiday and enjoyed your time off from work. I am so jealous! Anyway, ... I'm writing to invite...
by terry3218
Mon Jul 20, 2015 1:08 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: What is your opinion of this letter?
Replies: 0
Views: 1223

What is your opinion of this letter?

You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - say where you are going - describe your house - explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house. Dear John, I hope you’r...
by terry3218
Mon Jul 20, 2015 1:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: What do you make of this letter?
Replies: 5
Views: 3921

Re: What do you make of this letter?

Thanks everyone, especially Flick and Jesus
by terry3218
Thu Jul 16, 2015 7:23 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique my letter
Replies: 11
Views: 4149

Re: Please critique my letter

I have made another attempt at it. Please let me know what do you make of this letter. You colleague is coming back from a vacation abroad. Write a letter to him/her and say - Invite him/her to a party and mention the date and venue. - Write about some good news at the office. - Explain the reason f...
by terry3218
Thu Jul 16, 2015 6:55 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: what score would I get if I get 8 and 7.5 in t2 and t1?
Replies: 1
Views: 1598

what score would I get if I get 8 and 7.5 in t2 and t1?

Hi, I wanted to ask if I get 8 bands in writing task 2 and 7.5 in task 2, what overall writing score would I get?
s per the weighted average rule, it comes to 7.83. What will be the overall score then?
by terry3218
Wed Jul 15, 2015 9:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique my letter
Replies: 11
Views: 4149

Re: Please critique my letter

Hi This does not answer the question does it! The formality is wrong and it should be much more personal. If they have been on holiday you should mention that. The party you mention and the detailed information about your boss/job is really strange. As an examiner I would think you had 'memorised' ...
by terry3218
Tue Jul 14, 2015 8:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique my letter
Replies: 11
Views: 4149

Please critique my letter

You colleague is coming back from a vacation abroad. Write a letter to him/her and say - Invite him/her to a party and mention the date and venue. - Write about some good news at the office. - Explain the reason for the party. Dear John, I hope this letter finds you in good spirits. I am writing to ...
by terry3218
Sat Jul 04, 2015 5:22 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
Replies: 13
Views: 7590

Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.

No man, I am not. I wish I was, but thanks for the encouragement :D
by terry3218
Fri Jul 03, 2015 4:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: What do you make of this letter?
Replies: 5
Views: 3921

Re: What do you make of this letter?

Hey Terry. I happen to be an Academic module student, so I can't provide any constructive criticism on this because I honestly don't know how General task 1 is scored. But I think you did a great job. Good linking devices, good grammar and good vocabulary. The only thing (it's a very small mistake,...
by terry3218
Thu Jul 02, 2015 7:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: What do you make of this letter?
Replies: 5
Views: 3921

What do you make of this letter?

You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it. You should write at least 150 words. You d...
by terry3218
Thu Jul 02, 2015 9:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
Replies: 13
Views: 7590

Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.

The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagre...
by terry3218
Tue Jun 30, 2015 4:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique my letter
Replies: 3
Views: 1350

Re: Please critique my letter

thanks for the critique. I guess its mainly grammar that I struggle with. Anyways, I was hoping you could tell me whether its okay to use Dear Sir/madam every time rather than using a name for addressing? Of course, unless told to do otherwise.
by terry3218
Mon Jun 29, 2015 3:56 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: My question regarding Writing
Replies: 16
Views: 5258

Re: My question regarding Writing

Hi Precious, That's actually sometimes a tough question even for examiners! The task response is VERY developed. The examiner is looking for insightful arguments made very clearly. This is where knowledge of the topic (general, not specialised) becomes quite important (not at bands 5-6 as many cand...
by terry3218
Sat Jun 27, 2015 5:56 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Letter evaluation required
Replies: 3
Views: 1560

Re: Letter evaluation required

I guess your response is much better than mine. thanks for the idea. just that the "mindful" in your second paragraph is little perturbing. I am not sure if it is adequate to use? Your overall response is quite assembled too. Hi thanks for feedback. I wrote the letter and then realized th...
by terry3218
Sat Jun 27, 2015 5:38 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Letter evaluation required
Replies: 3
Views: 1560

Re: Letter evaluation required

Hi, I also tried writing the letter on the same topic. You are due to start a new job but you will not be able to because you have some problem. Write a letter to your new employer: 1.Explain your situation 2. Describe your problem 3. Tell him/her when you think you can start Dear Sir/Madam, I was a...
by terry3218
Fri Jun 26, 2015 5:43 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: My question regarding Writing
Replies: 16
Views: 5258

Re: My question regarding Writing

Hi Precious, Moving from 6.5 to 7 usually requires a much higher standard of grammar (few basic errors and a wide variety of both simple and complex sentence structures). You will probably need to develop your answers more too. This means extending the key points and ensuring that there is nothing ...
by terry3218
Fri Jun 26, 2015 5:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique my letter
Replies: 3
Views: 1350

Please critique my letter

Write a letter to your college’s administration department complaining about the college’s facilities. In your letter include: -what the problem is -how this problem has affected you -what the college should do to fix this problem Dear Sir/Madam, I am a third year accounting student, and I am writin...
by terry3218
Mon Jun 22, 2015 5:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please suggest a band score for this letter?
Replies: 1
Views: 719

Please suggest a band score for this letter?

Your friend has offered to sell you something. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter include: • -what the item is • -questions requesting details of the item being sold • -what price you think is fair Dear Ali, I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to you regarding the To...
by terry3218
Fri Jun 19, 2015 3:32 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
Replies: 6
Views: 2208

Re: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)

well in the context which u hv written i feel " strict attendance record should be taken, and people who who have enrolled in advance should only be allowed to attend the class. No last minute entry should be allowed, supervisor shd ensure etc " may sound appropriate . BTW how are when is...