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Scope: Government investment, art, public services I would have started my essay as.. Art is gaining a high popularity in today’s world. This statement can easily be claimed just by looking at the amount of money spent every year by the government on the art. Background sentence: Art is gaining a h...

Thanks a lot Flick. It's fascinating that you take time out of your schedule to help people.

I've started an essay but finding it excruciatingly hard to write a detailed background statement (if you're familiar with Ryan's structure, you'll know what I'm talking about) on the following topic: Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must...

If possible also give the essay an approx band score. I am still beginner for IELTS, I need at least band 7-7.5 Any suggestion to improll be highly appreciated! As far as I'm concerned, this essay would score at least 7 possibly even 8. But I'm no Ielts marker, neither am I a guru by any stretch of...

quote="bas"]Thanks a lot guys. I just took my IELTS exam earlier toand I attemped incorporating your suggestions. The essay was about how interesting and enjoyable television makes people's lives and if I agree or disagree with it. I hope I killed it :).[/quote] Wow man that's awesome. Let...

Hey there, I'm also aiming for band 8+, my Skype is sameed3218

i strongly favour the ielt-simon approach - a very short intro , one sentence paraphrasing the topic question/description and one sentence giving your answer /opinion. Everything you write should help you answer the question , and a lengthy background para does not do this , and cannot help you get...

a belter of an essay without complicating things too much. Thats all i can say.

Great essay, I wish you do get 8+ bands. And do let us know when your result comes out.

No, I doubt it was Simon's structure that got me a 7. I know I wasn't using good examples in that writing and I could have improved my coherence and cohesion as well. I think Ryan's essays have more cohesion and is easier to write after studying both structures so I just wanted to let you know my o...

Coincidentally, I used Simon's essay structure on my last IELTS exam too. I was aiming for an 8 but I ended up with a 7 unfortunately. After learning about Ryan's essay structure, I believe his version is better suited for me with my writing style and I feel like his has better cohesion throughout ...

Hi Terry, I am also aiming for band 8-9 on the IELTS. I am no IELTS tutor by any means but I will let you know about some of the things I have learned while preparing. Your essay looks very nice overall. There are a few suggestions I have that could increase your overall band score in my opinion. F...

Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view? In this digital age, we are barraged with an endless amount of advertisements on a daily basis, ranging from adverts on our cell phones to personal soliciting. Nonet...

I've sent Skype requests to y'all.

Hi I'm also at upper intermediate level. Looking to get at least 8 bands in speaking. I'm male 24 years old from Pakistan. Reply if you think we can practice speaking.

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. People have diff...

I think the introduction is too long . Other than that it's a great essay

[qu="IndianHarry"] Thanks a lot IndianHarry, where do you think I need improvement? and Btw you're essay is amazing, I'll analyze it for myself in detail and I'm sure I'll be able to learn a lot from it. I really don't see where you can improve. May be even more advanced grammatical struct...

which is a good and economical online essay marking serivces, I've come across Ielts-blog.com and ieltswriting task dotnet , the former cahrges $22 for marking 8 essays and has a very professional look to their website and the latter just charges aroung $2 per essay but their website doesnt have muc...

Thanks a lot IndianHarry, where do you think I need improvement? and Btw you're essay is amazing, I'll analyze it for myself in detail and I'm sure I'll be able to learn a lot from it.

I'm on mobile so can't really provide you detailed feedback but you've got some of your verbs wrong, and you've used indefinite article (a)(a sheer hard work) inappropriately at times

P. S I'm no expert

this is my essay I'm aiming for 8-9 bands, would you be kind enough to provide me some feedback on this essay regards. These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative de...

Anye wrote:Please help evaluate my speaking and provide ANY sort of feedback.

I'm saying this with the best possible intentions, you're accent can be really hard to understand at times and also you need to swifty up your pronunciation (eg feeling pronounced as filling)

My two cents

In my opinion it's a decent attempt although the vocabulary used is somewhat simpler than what I would think is ideal and I think I spotted a smidgen wrong prepositions(maybe one or two) nonetheless a good essay. What band are you hoping for? I didn't plan carefully and wrote too much. I didn't hav...

First of all, thanks for the positivity :) Well, I teach IELTS myself at a local institute here in India, and have to write task 2 essay samples at least every other day. This has been going for almost an year. That answers the how-much part I hope. As for how, I've simply picked whatever I've felt ...