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by bissaggy
Mon Dec 22, 2014 12:18 am
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: L7.5 R9 W8 S9
Replies: 2
Views: 8297

L7.5 R9 W8 S9

Hi Ryan, I got my results for IELTS General test taken on 6th December at Boston Centre. My Scrores are mentioned below.I want to thank you for the wonderful video tutorials.I did follow your patter of essay structure for writing and all your tips were indeed very helpful. However, my desired scrore...
by bissaggy
Fri Nov 28, 2014 1:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: [Task 1] Please, can someone check grammatics/vocabulary
Replies: 3
Views: 817

Re: [Task 1] Please, can someone check grammatics/vocabulary

hi Albert, 1. most important percentages should have been major percentage of 2.second line instead of "compares the expenses" , " compares the expenditure " is more appropriate 3.the line "overall, major fractions of expenditure were destined to food " is inappropriate...
by bissaggy
Fri Nov 28, 2014 1:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please rate my essay and give feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 1847

Re: Please rate my essay and give feedback

Hi Vidhu, This is a augment type essay and in general, for this kind of essay, we should hold a position and justify with examples. Yours is a well written essay,however I see you have taken both the positive and negative side and not sure if that's the right approach. Just check out the tense , for...
by bissaggy
Fri Nov 28, 2014 1:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Recent Topics from IELTS Writing-Everyone pls contribute
Replies: 2
Views: 670

Re: Recent Topics from IELTS Writing-Everyone pls contribute

Thanks vidhu and I do get your points.thanks for the feedback. My target is 8 though.
by bissaggy
Thu Nov 27, 2014 7:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Recent Topics from IELTS Writing-Everyone pls contribute
Replies: 2
Views: 670

Recent Topics from IELTS Writing-Everyone pls contribute

writing task 1 bangalore, india (22nd nov 2014).. you want to send organizer to some feedback on course 1)course details 2)how you enjoyed 3)suggesion to improve course My take on this is below-Pls review and rate Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to give some feedback on the recently concluded Or...
by bissaggy
Thu Nov 27, 2014 12:21 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: Ielts 6dec singapore
Replies: 8
Views: 4212

Re: Ielts 6dec singapore

I will appear on dec 6th from Boston
by bissaggy
Thu Nov 27, 2014 12:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: People rate my writing , My exam is very near it is on 4th d
Replies: 2
Views: 7440

Re: People rate my writing , My exam is very near it is on 4

Hi sneha,I went through the essay and felt something is missing.I think you could have given some more elaboration on the factors to choose before we take up a job.There are some grammatical errors like " earn a money".
I would rate this one as 6.5 and that's my personal opinion
by bissaggy
Thu Nov 27, 2014 12:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls rate this IELTS Task2 Essay-Aiming 8
Replies: 3
Views: 903

Re: Pls rate this IELTS Task2 Essay-Aiming 8

Thank you so much for the feedback,much appreciated.
by bissaggy
Wed Nov 26, 2014 5:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls rate this IELTS Task2 Essay-Aiming 8
Replies: 3
Views: 903

Pls rate this IELTS Task2 Essay-Aiming 8

Essay Topic: Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 Words With the advent of the 21st centur...
by bissaggy
Wed Nov 26, 2014 4:41 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: Pls rate this IELTS General Task2 Essay
Replies: 0
Views: 1488

Pls rate this IELTS General Task2 Essay

Essay Topic: Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 Words With the advent of the 21st centur...