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by devaraj
Wed Sep 10, 2014 1:00 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: How to prepare for part2 cue card speaking for this topic
Replies: 1
Views: 1732

How to prepare for part2 cue card speaking for this topic

HI everyone, How to prepare for part2 cue card speaking for this topic. I not able to get any idea to talk about this topic. Please suggest the theme to talk about it for two minutes. I think i can talk about paper purse which i made gift to my friend is that ok or any suggestions for it. Talk about...
by devaraj
Mon Aug 25, 2014 8:52 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: FREE IELTS SPEAKING EVALUATIONS
Replies: 21
Views: 14254

Re: FREE IELTS SPEAKING EVALUATIONS

Please evaluating my speaking recording.

Thanks
Devaraj
by devaraj
Sun Aug 03, 2014 6:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my IELTS TASK 2
Replies: 5
Views: 1691

Re: Please assess my IELTS TASK 2

Yes please assess my IELTS TASK 2
by devaraj
Sun Jul 27, 2014 6:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my IELTS TASK 2
Replies: 5
Views: 1691

Please assess my IELTS TASK 2

QUESTION: Some say that young people are not suitable for decision-making positions in governments; others, however, disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ANSWER: In this technological era, many youngsters playing decision making role in all the profession. Many believe that young ...
by devaraj
Sat Jul 26, 2014 1:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my General Writing Task 2.
Replies: 1
Views: 677

Re: Please assess my General Writing Task 2.

Problems like illiteracy, unemployment and lack of government support add to this making poverty a more complex problem.-->not appropriate words you can use "which makes poverty a more complex problem". Problems like illiteracy, unemployment and lack of government support leads poverty a m...
by devaraj
Sat Jul 26, 2014 5:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls correct my essay - sports
Replies: 4
Views: 2935

Re: Pls correct my essay - sports

Overall good essay. It look like 7 band essay. All the best.
by devaraj
Sat Jul 26, 2014 4:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess general task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 867

Re: Please assess general task 2

You will loose one band for task incomplete need 250 words. You will 5 or 5.5 band.
by devaraj
Sat Jul 26, 2014 4:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my task 2 ..
Replies: 3
Views: 852

Re: Please assess my task 2 ..

To summarize, the Internet has brought to everyones life many goodies,
To summarize, the Internet has brought to everyone's life many goodies,


Overall good essay. It look like 7band essay.
by devaraj
Fri Jul 25, 2014 12:49 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls correct my academic writing task 2 - airfare
Replies: 2
Views: 1223

Re: Pls correct my academic writing task 2 - airfare

the emission rights permission for carbon dioxide is particularly for controlling the consumption of fossil fuel. --> not able to understand your idea clearly in this conclusion part.

Overall good essay. All the best!.
by devaraj
Fri Jul 25, 2014 12:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls correct writing task 2 - equality in working environment
Replies: 2
Views: 1002

Re: Pls correct writing task 2 - equality in working environ

Overall good essay. It look like 7 band essay. All the best.
by devaraj
Fri Jul 25, 2014 12:33 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic: Which better? Living in a city or country(150 words)
Replies: 2
Views: 682

Re: Topic: Which better? Living in a city or country(150 wor

To sum up; although, the city still have some problems needing to be solved by government , living in a city is always suitable for young people and children because it will brings for us benefit and improve the qualify of life. --> after mentioning young people and children no need to use word &quo...
by devaraj
Fri Jul 25, 2014 12:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Describe one of your special occasions last year.
Replies: 2
Views: 10404

Re: Describe one of your special occasions last year.

overall good writing. All the best!.
by devaraj
Fri Jul 25, 2014 12:23 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing about 150 words about your dream or ambition.
Replies: 2
Views: 79207

Re: Writing about 150 words about your dream or ambition.

I think that that studying abroad helps me widen knowledge more than studying in Vietnam. I think that studying abroad helps me widen knowledge more than studying in Vietnam. --> this sentence is not appropriate rewrite needed I think that my dream of studying abroad helps me to gain more knowledge ...
by devaraj
Fri Jul 25, 2014 2:58 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my General Writing Task 2.
Replies: 3
Views: 725

Re: Please assess my General Writing Task 2.

Avoid "we" in your essay Thoughts of dressing, eating, respecting others are heavily influenced by the place we live and how we are brought up.--> respecting "others" apt word is respecting elders Thoughts of dressing, eating, respecting elders are heavily influenced by the place...
by devaraj
Fri Jul 25, 2014 2:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Academic Writing Task 2 - Please access my essay!!
Replies: 2
Views: 1254

Re: IELTS Academic Writing Task 2 - Please access my essay!!

It could help you become more beautiful, but at the same time, make you become a surgery disaster, if the surgery does not succeed. As a teenager, trying to enhance our body is necessary, but we should also try to improve our personality. --> Avoid you and our, we -->question is about people under 1...
by devaraj
Fri Jul 25, 2014 2:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please access my essay for IELTS Academic Writing Task 2!!
Replies: 2
Views: 735

Re: Please access my essay for IELTS Academic Writing Task 2

Overall it look like 7 band essay. All the best.
by devaraj
Thu Jul 24, 2014 5:49 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me assessing my writing task 1 for GT
Replies: 2
Views: 1076

Re: Please help me assessing my writing task 1 for GT

I don't have the luxury of time to attend both the courses---> i think this line is not required if you telling them no more time then they won't consider for study in their institute. With my strong background and willingness to learn, I believe, I can cover up the elementary course at my own. --> ...
by devaraj
Thu Jul 24, 2014 5:43 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my IELTS TASK 2 GT
Replies: 2
Views: 522

Please assess my IELTS TASK 2 GT

[QUESTION:] Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only; others, however, feel cell phones should be used mostly for work. Discuss both views and give your opinion. [ANSWER:] In this technological world, for better communication cell phones are inevitable in everyone's life....