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by lucifer169
Tue Dec 08, 2020 6:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback
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Task 2: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback

Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about this topic. People should work a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write...
by lucifer169
Tue Dec 08, 2020 6:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback
Replies: 1
Views: 6721

Task 1: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback

Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. People in your area are having problem! with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter • Describe the problem • explain how they are affecting people • Say what the company should do t...
by lucifer169
Mon Nov 23, 2020 4:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 7372

Re: Task 2: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback

Thanks a lot for your review @goldcoastielts, really appreciate it :) The main subject of the sentence is the singular "sector", so the be verb refers back to that noun, not forward to the plural "industries". This was actually targeting multiple sectors (industries) and not one....
by lucifer169
Thu Nov 19, 2020 4:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 7205

Re: Task 1: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback

Thanks for the great feedback @goldcoastielts, I'll keep your pointers in mind in the future. :)

(And thanks for catching the wrong question, fixed that!)
by lucifer169
Wed Nov 18, 2020 5:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 7205

Task 1: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback

Task 1 Picture 1.png Dear Julie, Hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to you in response to your letter about the racket I caused on the night of 4th of July 2020. As you might already be aware, 4th of July is celebrated as the Independence Day in the United States. Given the festive mood, I decided ...
by lucifer169
Wed Nov 18, 2020 5:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 7372

Task 2: Please evaluate and give your valuable feedback

Task 2 – Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Earth, our home planet that we share with the plethora of different flora and fauna, is being ridiculed by this deluge of garbage being...