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by Xbb
Sun Sep 03, 2017 12:50 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Repost - Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities.
Replies: 0
Views: 2380

Repost - Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities.

Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ------------------------...
by Xbb
Mon Aug 07, 2017 3:00 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Discussion essay on topic of Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible
Replies: 1
Views: 22933

Discussion essay on topic of Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to share freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. --------------------------------...
by Xbb
Mon Aug 07, 2017 2:47 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 topic Outweighing ad/disad of a young population
Replies: 1
Views: 4289

Task 2 topic Outweighing ad/disad of a young population

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? -------------------------------------- xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx -------------...
by Xbb
Fri Jul 14, 2017 4:15 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Repost Task 2- Without the success of career, life becomes meaningless
Replies: 2
Views: 5081

Repost Task 2- Without the success of career, life becomes meaningless

Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree? --------------------------------------- ************************ -------------------------------------- It is thought by some t...
by Xbb
Mon Jul 10, 2017 4:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Repost - Pls give me your comments
Replies: 3
Views: 3094

Re: Repost - Pls give me your comments

Hi David, What would you say about this sample essay? http://ieltsliz.com/ielts-advantage-disadvantage-model-essay/ Points are similar to a certain extent. Hello! The range and accuracy of grammar is reasonable to some extent. However, a greater variety, particularly conditionals, would make your ar...
by Xbb
Tue Jun 27, 2017 3:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Repost - Pls give me your comments
Replies: 3
Views: 3094

Re: Repost - Pls give me your comments

Hi David, Many thanks for your marking efforts. I would refrain from using 'extreme' words which might be confusing to others. But I guess the severe mistakes that I made in this essay is lacking of precise adverbs, which would be misleading in certain situations. Best regards, Xbb 2. Many forms of ...
by Xbb
Mon Jun 26, 2017 9:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Repost - Pls give me your comments
Replies: 3
Views: 3094

Repost - Pls give me your comments

Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? --------------------------------------------------- **************************** ----------------------------------------------------- It is forecast by some scientists ...
by Xbb
Mon May 08, 2017 10:26 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Pls review - Important choice
Replies: 2
Views: 7196

Re: Pls review - Important choice

Many thanks, David. Seeming I'm stuck with speaking as my weakest skill. Hello! Fluency - Very, very slow speech. Not many pauses, however. Coherence - Good use of a variety of connectives. Vocabulary - Very little detail. It's actually pretty unclear what you mean. No examples. What job did you do?...
by Xbb
Thu May 04, 2017 3:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language
Replies: 0
Views: 8827

Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language

Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion? ------------------------------ ********************* ------------------------------------- It is believed by some that only until can individuals speak the l...
by Xbb
Tue May 02, 2017 7:40 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Pls review - Important choice
Replies: 2
Views: 7196

Pls review - Important choice

Describe an important choice you had to make in your life.
You should say:
When you had this choice
What you had to choose between
Whether you made a good choice
And explain how you felt when you were making this choice
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by Xbb
Tue May 02, 2017 5:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic_Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools
Replies: 0
Views: 5594

Topic_Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools

Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ------------------------------------------------------ *************...
by Xbb
Tue May 02, 2017 3:32 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: [ Pls review] Cue card - An equipment at home
Replies: 2
Views: 6902

Re: [ Pls review] Cue card - An equipment at home

Thanks a ton, David !!!
by Xbb
Tue May 02, 2017 3:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Discipline topic needs your review
Replies: 1
Views: 1295

Discipline topic needs your review

Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ********************************************************************...
by Xbb
Thu Apr 27, 2017 3:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 review needed: Location for New homes and accommodation ?
Replies: 4
Views: 2899

Re: Task 2 review needed: Location for New homes and accommodation ?

Dear Flick,
Thanks a lot for your correcting effort.
Could my essay earn the band score of 9 after your revision?
by Xbb
Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: [Review needed]- Discipline and right and wrong education or nurturing in safe environment for children.
Replies: 0
Views: 1890

[Review needed]- Discipline and right and wrong education or nurturing in safe environment for children.

Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both views and give your opinio...
by Xbb
Sun Apr 16, 2017 3:48 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: [ Pls review] Cue card - An equipment at home
Replies: 2
Views: 6902

[ Pls review] Cue card - An equipment at home

Thanks a ton in advance !!
Cues -->
What it is
HOw often do you use it
Who use it with you
Explain why it is important to you :D

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by Xbb
Fri Apr 14, 2017 1:49 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Why many IELTS candidates get a high score after challenging ?
Replies: 1
Views: 1430

Re: Why many IELTS candidates get a high score after challenging ?

I guess it is acceptable to say that at certain times, there maybe a few examiners could be reckless while marking. Probably it is due to huge piles of essays on each exam that this issue might happen. Appealed essay should be differently remarked thus its score maybe changed or increased. I suppose...
by Xbb
Wed Apr 05, 2017 10:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 review needed: Location for New homes and accommodation ?
Replies: 4
Views: 2899

Task 2 review needed: Location for New homes and accommodation ?

Nowadays the population of the world is increasing rapidly. New homes and accommodation should be built for this additional population. Some believe that more houses should be constructed in existing towns and cities. Others believe that creating entirely new towns in the countryside to accommodate...
by Xbb
Wed Apr 05, 2017 10:04 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 review needed: Better pay for professional workers?
Replies: 3
Views: 3708

Task 2 review needed: Better pay for professional workers?

Some people believe that professional workers like doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples. -------------------------------------------- *************************** -------...
by Xbb
Wed Apr 05, 2017 10:02 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Review needed - Letter for vacanceis at children summer holiday camp
Replies: 1
Views: 1655

Review needed - Letter for vacanceis at children summer holiday camp

You recently saw an advertisement about helpers for children summer holiday camp. Write a letter to camp organizers and say: – Describe the areas where you can help. – Give the time period you are available. – Ask some questions about the camp. ------------------------------------------ ************...
by Xbb
Mon Apr 03, 2017 3:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Need another vet on Open space topic
Replies: 2
Views: 1574

Need another vet on Open space topic

Some people believe that modern designs for schools and offices with more open spaces are necessary. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such spaces? Give your opinion. ------------------------------------------- ******************************** ------------------------------------ Nowaday...
by Xbb
Mon Apr 03, 2017 3:16 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: An important historical event to your country
Replies: 2
Views: 8116

Re: An important historical event to your country

Appreciation for your reviewing efforts, David!!
All the best,
Xbb
by Xbb
Mon Apr 03, 2017 2:42 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: An important historical event to your country
Replies: 2
Views: 8116

An important historical event to your country

Cue card:
Describe a historical event to your country.
- When was the event?
- When and where it took place?
- Why this event was important to your country history?
Explain why you still remember it.