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by MooChang
Sat May 06, 2017 8:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Dear David Sir, please evaluate, thanks
Replies: 3
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Hello! I don't give band scores, but here's my assessment. TR - The introduction is twice as long as the conclusion and the second main paragraph! Basic arguments are good and the first main paragraph is developed. No personal conclusion. CC - Good use of connectives. LR - Some VERY weird phrasing ...
by MooChang
Thu Apr 27, 2017 6:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Dear David Sir, please evaluate, thanks
Replies: 3
Views: 1852

Dear David Sir, please evaluate, thanks

Question from Cambridge,Practice Tests for, IELTS 1 Vanessa Jakeman Clare McDowel As part of a class assigment you have to write about the following topic: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things ...
by MooChang
Tue Apr 25, 2017 11:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please rating (band 1-9) and comments into Task Response Coherence and Cohensive Grammatical range and accuracy Lexical
Replies: 0
Views: 2151

Please rating (band 1-9) and comments into Task Response Coherence and Cohensive Grammatical range and accuracy Lexical

Question from Cambridge,Practice Tests for, IELTS 1 Vanessa Jakeman Clare McDowel As part of a class assigment you have to write about the following topic: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things ...
by MooChang
Mon Mar 27, 2017 2:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammati
Replies: 1
Views: 1347

Re: Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and gram

Please, Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammatical range & accuracy, many thanks.
by MooChang
Fri Mar 24, 2017 8:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammati
Replies: 1
Views: 1347

Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammati

Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammatical range & accuracy, many thanks.
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by MooChang
Fri Mar 24, 2017 8:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammati
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Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammati

Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammatical range & accuracy, many thanks.
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by MooChang
Thu Mar 23, 2017 7:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammatical range & accuracy,
Replies: 0
Views: 2073

Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammatical range & accuracy,

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by MooChang
Thu Mar 23, 2017 7:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammatical range & accuracy,
Replies: 0
Views: 1681

Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammatical range & accuracy,

Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammatical range & accuracy, many thanks.
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by MooChang
Wed Mar 08, 2017 6:31 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please advise, many thanks
Replies: 2
Views: 1334

Re: Please advise, many thanks

Thank you, sir.

Would you mind give the rate of this essay.
by MooChang
Tue Mar 07, 2017 6:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please advise, many thanks
Replies: 2
Views: 1334

Please advise, many thanks

Question You recently stayed in a large city. The weather was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter 1) give details of what was wrong 2) explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time 3) say what action you would like the manager to take My answ...