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by meir
Wed Mar 29, 2017 8:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please could you assess my writing part 1. Thank you!
Replies: 0
Views: 2501

Please could you assess my writing part 1. Thank you!

The chart compares the number of books borrowed from a Malton Town library in England in twelve-month period in 2009. Overall, it can be seen that most of books rented were in August and December months, with 20 and 21 books respectively, while the lowest rate was witnessed in February, March and No...
by meir
Tue Mar 21, 2017 6:11 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!
Replies: 0
Views: 1885

Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!

Question: It is a common aspiration among many young people to run their own business, rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself overweigh the drawbacks? Answer: In recent years, opening a business has become very tempting way to make money. Moreover, mor...
by meir
Mon Mar 20, 2017 6:41 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!
Replies: 0
Views: 1926

Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!

Question: People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the most significant of these problems? How can these problems be tackled? Answer: These days, people have to deal with many issues by living in large cities. Although it is said that large cities give ...
by meir
Sun Mar 19, 2017 12:57 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!
Replies: 0
Views: 1944

Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!

Question: Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age of 5 or 6, right up until the age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams? Answer: These days, tests and exams become common method of assessing knowledge of p...
by meir
Thu Mar 16, 2017 8:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!
Replies: 3
Views: 1696

Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!

Question: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home. Answer: These days, working from remote locations become very frequent in modern world. Technologies become more and more reliable and faster, so companies tend to cut costs by this. In this essay, I will look to pros and cons...
by meir
Tue Mar 14, 2017 9:31 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!
Replies: 1
Views: 4324

Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!

Question: Some hold the view that ideas and information should be completely open, and there should be no controls on what people can read and watch in the media (TV, newspapers, Internet). Do you agree with this view, or do you think that in some circumstances governments should limit the freedom ...
by meir
Mon Mar 13, 2017 1:54 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you give your feedback on my essay task 2. Thanks a lot!
Replies: 4
Views: 1891

Re: Could you give your feedback on my essay task 2. Thanks a lot!

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Thanks a lot. I will be very grateful if you send links to the videos you have mentioned.
by meir
Sun Mar 12, 2017 6:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you give your feedback on my essay task 2. Thanks a lot!
Replies: 4
Views: 1891

Could you give your feedback on my essay task 2. Thanks a lot!

Question: Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss. Answer: These days, sending criminals to prison is one of the most controversial methods of punishment. According to statistics, many people vote exactly for this opinion. However, I totally disagree with this opinion. In this essay, I...
by meir
Wed Mar 08, 2017 9:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you assess my writing task? Thanks in advance
Replies: 2
Views: 1394

Re: Could you assess my writing task? Thanks in advance

Thank you, I really appreciate it!
by meir
Tue Mar 07, 2017 8:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!
Replies: 0
Views: 1843

Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!

Question: All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled? Answer: These days, obesity becomes increasingly worrying issue in modern society worldwide. Peopl...
by meir
Mon Mar 06, 2017 8:11 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you assess my writing task? Thanks in advance
Replies: 2
Views: 1394

Could you assess my writing task? Thanks in advance

Question: These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved? Answer: Nowadays, the profession of teachers becomes less attractive than before for young graduates worldwi...