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by Hazem123
Fri Apr 21, 2017 10:31 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my letter writing. Thank you
Replies: 0
Views: 2074

please assess my letter writing. Thank you

You lost a bag while you are traveling back home by the British Airlines Flight No. 7846 London – Cairo. It has been two weeks and you haven’t received any news about it yet. Write a letter to the Airlines manager asking him about the steps taken by the company. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inqu...
by Hazem123
Fri Apr 21, 2017 9:52 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT task 1 (letter)
Replies: 1
Views: 1331

GT task 1 (letter)

Write a letter to your friend John apologizing for not being able to visit him during the next summer as you are planning to take England Language Course to improve your language. Dear John, How’s it going? It’s been ages since we last met. You must be eager to see me next summer. In fact, I do fee...
by Hazem123
Sat Apr 15, 2017 3:58 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: task 2 response, please evaluate.
Replies: 1
Views: 1241

task 2 response, please evaluate.

Over-population is a very serious problem. it affects education, health, traffic and economy. how can the governments solve this problem? Recently, there has been a considerable surge in the number of population all over the world. This has led to serious ramifications in various fields including e...
by Hazem123
Fri Apr 14, 2017 10:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing "task2"
Replies: 0
Views: 1886

Please assess my writing "task2"

With all troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. This money could be better spend on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Throughout the years, there has been a compelling desire to get clear knowledge about the outer space which is believ...
by Hazem123
Wed Apr 12, 2017 8:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: May you please critique my task 2 writing?
Replies: 4
Views: 1936

Re: May you please critique my task 2 writing?

Thanks for your reply, I have a question regarding your comment on the conclusion section. How can I explain the reasons for supporting a certain opinion while this is explained in the previous paragraphs? Also, what I know is that I shouldn't include new ideas in the conclusion. So, how should I re...
by Hazem123
Tue Apr 11, 2017 6:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: task 2 response. appreciating your assessment
Replies: 1
Views: 1242

task 2 response. appreciating your assessment

The idea of having a single career is becoming an old-fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money. Which opinion do you agree with? Throughout the years, having a career has always been an essential part of everyone’s life. There is now a controversy over ...
by Hazem123
Tue Apr 11, 2017 6:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: May you please critique my task 2 writing?
Replies: 4
Views: 1936

May you please critique my task 2 writing?

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives? Which point of view do you agree with? Nowadays, it is well known that companies cannot do without advertisements. Many peopl...
by Hazem123
Sat Feb 18, 2017 10:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you please evaluate my task 2 writing?
Replies: 0
Views: 2292

Could you please evaluate my task 2 writing?

Question Shopping is dangerous because it makes people selfish, and careless with money. Do you agree or disagree? Answer Today, shopping has become increasingly popular among people. Some people believe that this is advantageous and adds to the people’s welfare. However, it is argued that this may ...
by Hazem123
Fri Feb 17, 2017 6:30 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my letter
Replies: 1
Views: 1248

Please evaluate my letter

You are going away travelling for the summer. You want a friend to look after your home while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • say where you are going • describe your home • explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house Dear Mark, How’s it goin...
by Hazem123
Wed Feb 08, 2017 10:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my task 1 writing (letter)
Replies: 1
Views: 1216

please evaluate my task 1 writing (letter)

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter • Introduce yourself • Explain what is wrong with the furniture • Say what action you would like th...
by Hazem123
Wed Feb 08, 2017 10:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my essay (general)
Replies: 0
Views: 1837

please evaluate my essay (general)

Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person need to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or exper...