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by dinosaur2007
Tue Oct 27, 2020 4:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.
Replies: 1
Views: 4831

Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.

Question: In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Answer: Tr...
by dinosaur2007
Thu Oct 22, 2020 4:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 writing. Feedback is much appreciated
Replies: 1
Views: 4802

Task 2 writing. Feedback is much appreciated

Some people believe that nowadayswe have many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? This was a hard topic for me, so I hope you can provide me with good advice regarding my response. Answer: Currently, with the help of technological advancements, it is claimed by some...
by dinosaur2007
Thu Oct 22, 2020 1:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.
Replies: 3
Views: 5182

Re: Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.

Thank you for this amazing feedback. This is very valuable and confidence-boosting at the same time. I would like to ask you for an advice though. You mentioned that I should learn the really natural phrasing of the English language. I totally agree with you, and this is one of the things I really s...
by dinosaur2007
Tue Oct 20, 2020 12:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic task 1 writing. Please evaluate my report
Replies: 3
Views: 5207

Re: Academic task 1 writing. Please evaluate my report

Thank you so much for your evaluation. I just have a question though. You said that it is better to use the same tense in order nor to confuse the reader, as I was using the present simple and the past simple. In my understanding, however, the pie chart represented a time period in the past, so in t...
by dinosaur2007
Sun Oct 18, 2020 5:00 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.
Replies: 3
Views: 5182

Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.

Question: In some cultures, children are told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Answer: Childhood is an extremely important phase in our lives, during which lots of concepts and principles are instilled in th...
by dinosaur2007
Sun Oct 18, 2020 4:00 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic task 1 writing. Please evaluate my report
Replies: 3
Views: 5207

Academic task 1 writing. Please evaluate my report

The question is in the attachments. Answer: The pie chart illustrates what Anthropology students of a certain university ended up doing after graduating, while the table outlines the average salaries these graduates earn 5 years after the start of their employment. Overall, it can be observed that a...
by dinosaur2007
Sat Oct 17, 2020 4:56 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 response. Kindly evaluate
Replies: 3
Views: 5431

Re: Writing task 2 response. Kindly evaluate

Thank you so much for your evaluation.
Those are really helpful comments and they are greatly appreciated.
by dinosaur2007
Fri Oct 16, 2020 4:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 response. Kindly evaluate
Replies: 3
Views: 5431

Writing task 2 response. Kindly evaluate

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Answer Humans are consumers by nature, and they need to buy food, drinks an...
by dinosaur2007
Wed Apr 26, 2017 9:26 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: requesting advice regarding punctuation
Replies: 1
Views: 6304

requesting advice regarding punctuation

Hello, I always feel confused when trying to use some punctuation marks in some situations. For example, when using the words "however" and "therefore", when to use a semicolon before them and when to put a full stop. Another thing I'd like to ask about is the problem with the wo...
by dinosaur2007
Sat Apr 22, 2017 8:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: kindly evaluate my task 2 writing
Replies: 0
Views: 1997

kindly evaluate my task 2 writing

It is important for the government to spend more money on promotion of people’s health rather than medical treatment. Do you agree or disagree? Please give your opinion Nowadays, it is conspicuous that medical care is gaining constantly increasing attention every day. It is controversial whether it...
by dinosaur2007
Fri Apr 21, 2017 10:03 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT letter, please assess my writing
Replies: 1
Views: 1324

GT letter, please assess my writing

You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend • Explaining what you would like to do. • Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years. • Ask ...
by dinosaur2007
Sat Apr 15, 2017 3:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: studying abroad: advantages and disadvantages (task 2 essay, please evaluate)
Replies: 0
Views: 3367

studying abroad: advantages and disadvantages (task 2 essay, please evaluate)

Everything in this world has its own advantages and disadvantages as nothing is perfect. Studying abroad is no exception to this rule. Although many people may disagree, I am inclined to believe that its merits outweigh its drawbacks. This essay will discuss the two sides of this issue. On the one h...
by dinosaur2007
Fri Apr 14, 2017 12:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General task 2 writing, please evaluate my essay.
Replies: 0
Views: 1853

General task 2 writing, please evaluate my essay.

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will the be used for in the future? is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits? In the light of the conti...
by dinosaur2007
Wed Apr 12, 2017 9:54 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 essay response. Please evaluate my writing
Replies: 1
Views: 1374

Task 2 essay response. Please evaluate my writing

Many people in the underdeveloped world die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication to treat themselves. Do you believe that drug companies in the developed world should be obliged to make their products available at reduced prices in these underdeveloped countries s...
by dinosaur2007
Tue Apr 11, 2017 5:59 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General task 2 response. kindly evaluate my writing
Replies: 1
Views: 1358

General task 2 response. kindly evaluate my writing

Should students do postgraduate studies after their graduation, or should they start working at once? Nowadays, a considerable debate has been aroused around the necessity of postgraduate studies after graduation. It is believed by some people that these studies are of paramount importance before st...
by dinosaur2007
Tue Apr 11, 2017 5:46 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: could you please assess my task 2 response?
Replies: 3
Views: 1733

could you please assess my task 2 response?

Should students study and work at the same time, or should they study first and then work? Which opinion do you agree with? There is no doubt that studying and working at the same time has aroused a lot of controversy in the last few years. Although a group of people claims that students should stud...
by dinosaur2007
Sat Feb 25, 2017 3:50 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writing task 2, kindly evaluate this essay.
Replies: 1
Views: 1330

writing task 2, kindly evaluate this essay.

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion No one can deny the significance of education in our lives wh...
by dinosaur2007
Sun Feb 19, 2017 10:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: could you please assess this essay?
Replies: 1
Views: 1389

could you please assess this essay?

Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Answer No one can deny that marriage is an urgent desire for most people. But, a question usually arises regarding how to choose the...
by dinosaur2007
Sat Feb 18, 2017 5:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my task 1 writing (letter)
Replies: 0
Views: 1838

Please assess my task 1 writing (letter)

Your neighbour has a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, • describe the problem with the dog • explain why it is important for you to sleep • outline what your neighbour could do about the situation Answer Dear Mr. Green, I am writing to you...
by dinosaur2007
Sat Feb 11, 2017 2:57 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Reposting my general task 1 response
Replies: 2
Views: 1471

Reposting my general task 1 response

question: "Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In this letter *explain the reasons for the noise. *apologize *describe what action you will take" My answer is: "Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown, I am ...
by dinosaur2007
Sat Feb 04, 2017 11:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hope you evaluate my task 1 writing (letter)
Replies: 0
Views: 1858

Hope you evaluate my task 1 writing (letter)

question: "Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In this letter *explain the reasons for the noise. *apologize *describe what action you will take" My answer is: "Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown, I am ...
by dinosaur2007
Sat Feb 04, 2017 10:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my GT task 1 writing
Replies: 2
Views: 1389

Re: Kindly assess my GT task 1 writing

Thank you for your reply,
Do you mean that some sentences have mistakes or are they just not good?. May you give me some exames for these?
Could you also explain how I moved away from the topic?
What band score does this piece of writing deserve?

Thank you
by dinosaur2007
Fri Feb 03, 2017 6:20 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my GT task 1 writing
Replies: 2
Views: 1389

Kindly assess my GT task 1 writing

Hello! The question is: "You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue this course. Write a letter to your course tutor. In this letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would l...
by dinosaur2007
Fri Feb 03, 2017 3:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my GT task 2 writing
Replies: 2
Views: 1520

Please evaluate my GT task 2 writing

Hello, The questions says "Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? what can governments do to help reduce the amount of the rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience." ...
by dinosaur2007
Fri Feb 03, 2017 11:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you please assess my General Training task 2 writing?
Replies: 3
Views: 1600

Re: Could you please assess my General Training task 2 writing?

Thanks for your reply, I'm wondering if you can tell me how to improve this essay and strengthen my argument especially when I don't know real examples. Is it a problem to present the example as an absolute fact? and if I don't know real example to the argument, how can I prove my point and make it ...