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by adamrahimov
Sun Mar 05, 2017 9:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: how should juvenile delinquency be punished? writing task 2
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how should juvenile delinquency be punished? writing task 2

It is true that the juvenile delinquency has turned into a more serious problem in recent years. Concerning the issue that how teenagers should be punished people have different opinions. As far as I am concerned, I believe that they also should be punished in that vein as adults for the major offen...
by adamrahimov
Mon Feb 20, 2017 2:53 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Negative and positive sides of zoos
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Views: 5555

Negative and positive sides of zoos

Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides and give your personal view. Zoos are still the artificial environments where people visit to undergo the feeling o...
by adamrahimov
Sun Feb 19, 2017 1:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 importance of music and traditional music or international?
Replies: 2
Views: 2836

Re: Task 2 importance of music and traditional music or international?

Thanks for the feedback. I will take into account in my next essay
by adamrahimov
Sat Feb 18, 2017 6:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 importance of music and traditional music or international?
Replies: 2
Views: 2836

Task 2 importance of music and traditional music or international?

There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Nowadays, people have a variety of different musical styles to listen. Listening music have turned into indispe...
by adamrahimov
Mon Feb 06, 2017 1:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writing task 2. Teaching foreign languages at primary schoold
Replies: 5
Views: 2189

Re: writing task 2. Teaching foreign languages at primary schoold

Some people believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Discuss both views and give your opinion. The benefits virtues (Virtue means the quality of high moral standards and ethics but not the merits)[/color] of learning...
by adamrahimov
Mon Feb 06, 2017 1:12 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writing task 2. Teaching foreign languages at primary schoold
Replies: 5
Views: 2189

Re: writing task 2. Teaching foreign languages at primary schoold

Hello! There are two quite big problems with the arguments you have presented. First, you haven't compared learning at primary and secondary school. Second, you say it depends on the children's choices. Really? I honestly cannot think of an example of where children make their own education choices...
by adamrahimov
Sun Feb 05, 2017 6:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writing task 2. Teaching foreign languages at primary schoold
Replies: 5
Views: 2189

writing task 2. Teaching foreign languages at primary schoold

Some people believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Discuss both views and give your opinion. The virtues of learning foreign languages are too visible to be neglected. But is it wise to burden children with foreign ...
by adamrahimov
Sat Feb 04, 2017 7:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you evaluate my writing task 1 please? Your feedback and score is valuable for me
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Could you evaluate my writing task 1 please? Your feedback and score is valuable for me

Rubric: The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on the consumer goods in 2010. The chart compares the money which was spent on consumer goods by two countries (France and UK) in 2010. It can be seen that, with the exception of cameras, there are no big differences in the outlays of th...
by adamrahimov
Sun Jan 29, 2017 8:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you evaluate my writing?
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Views: 1757

Could you evaluate my writing?

Some people think that children sould learn to compete, but others think they should be taught to co-operate so they could become more useful aduls. Give your opinion With the advancement of the technology, everything, as well as our way of lives, has changed. In retrospect, we can see our ancestry ...