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by AhmadMukhtiar
Fri Jul 04, 2014 8:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task-2
Replies: 0
Views: 518

Task-2

The proportion of aging population in some countries is increasing currently, which causes many unpredictable effects on both individuals as well as the society. What are the effects on both sides? It is estimated by Japanese scientists that in the near future the total number of aged people would b...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Fri May 09, 2014 1:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: guys--my unfortunate result
Replies: 6
Views: 1838

Re: guys--my unfortunate result

I would suggest you going for an EOR ... Hopefully you would improve from 6.5 to 7.0 ... Best wishes..
by AhmadMukhtiar
Thu Apr 24, 2014 2:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: guys, today's test question
Replies: 14
Views: 3241

Re: guys, today's test question

It would be better if Ryan could describe it in detail because everyone has written in contrasting ways... :D
by AhmadMukhtiar
Thu Apr 24, 2014 2:23 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: guys, today's test question
Replies: 14
Views: 3241

Re: guys, today's test question

The topic was too confusing ... I think it didn't talk about people. It mentioned ''too much noise in public places'' ... I wrote about some public places like markets, why they are noisy, and what can be done ... with a cause and effect strategy ... Dnt knw if it was the right way ... Not fully sat...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Sat Apr 19, 2014 1:57 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task-1
Replies: 1
Views: 794

Task-1

Q: you have a full-time job and also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take Dear Mr.XYZ, I am cur...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Fri Apr 18, 2014 7:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate Task-2
Replies: 2
Views: 1009

Re: Please evaluate Task-2

please evaluate this essay.
by AhmadMukhtiar
Thu Apr 17, 2014 9:35 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate Task-2
Replies: 2
Views: 1009

Please evaluate Task-2

Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? World peace today is threatened by many criminals. However, among the most concerning are those who commit for the first time. Increase in crime rates i...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Wed Apr 16, 2014 3:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly critique my Task-1
Replies: 5
Views: 1828

Re: Kindly critique my Task-1

Thank you Ryan for your suggestions and corrections. It was really helpful.
by AhmadMukhtiar
Wed Apr 16, 2014 2:52 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly critique my Task-1
Replies: 5
Views: 1828

Re: Kindly critique my Task-1

Thank you for remarks and suggestion. It was very helpful.
by AhmadMukhtiar
Wed Apr 16, 2014 1:56 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly critique my Task-1
Replies: 5
Views: 1828

Kindly critique my Task-1

Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: - describe the problem with the dog - explain why it is important for you to sleep - outline what your neighbours could do about the situation. Dear Mr. & Mrs. XYZ, Hope this le...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Wed Apr 16, 2014 4:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: how technology affect ways of life
Replies: 2
Views: 1020

Re: how technology affect ways of life

Thank you for a good analysis. I have learnt some good things from it.
by AhmadMukhtiar
Tue Apr 15, 2014 7:02 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: how technology affect ways of life
Replies: 2
Views: 1020

how technology affect ways of life

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? In recent times, Science has greatly changed the traditional skills and lifestyle of the people. It is eviden...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Mon Apr 14, 2014 1:30 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: something you did to help someone
Replies: 2
Views: 1860

Re: something you did to help someone

Thank you very much for your analysis. It was very helpful.
by AhmadMukhtiar
Sat Apr 12, 2014 6:31 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: something you did to help someone
Replies: 2
Views: 1860

something you did to help someone

Hi this is my very first attempt. Please critique it.

http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/file.php?id=120
by AhmadMukhtiar
Thu Apr 10, 2014 6:58 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: looking for speaking partner
Replies: 9
Views: 3354

Re: looking for speaking partner

well, i also want a speaking partner ...my skype id is ahmad_mukhtiar
by AhmadMukhtiar
Tue Apr 08, 2014 6:35 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Attention first time posters!
Replies: 70
Views: 173563

Re: Enrich the writing forum by contributing to it

Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city. Do you agree or disagree? In recent times, the ways of public transportation has largely developed. Now-a-days metro is its most recent form which allows an ea...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Tue Apr 08, 2014 4:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate essay
Replies: 0
Views: 613

Please evaluate essay

Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city. Do you agree or disagree? In recent times, the ways of public transportation has been largely developed. Now-a-days metro is its most recent form which allows ...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Mon Apr 07, 2014 11:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate Letter
Replies: 4
Views: 2468

Re: Please evaluate Letter

Thank you for your correction. I have learnt some good things.
by AhmadMukhtiar
Mon Apr 07, 2014 8:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate Letter
Replies: 4
Views: 2468

Please evaluate Letter

You have recently ordered an item through the Internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter: - describe what you purchased, - explain why you are not happy with the purchase, - tell them what you would like them to do about the situation. Dear Sir or Madam, Last...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Sat Apr 05, 2014 4:23 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate task 1
Replies: 6
Views: 1708

Re: Please evaluate task 1

Thank you for providing such helpful feed back.
by AhmadMukhtiar
Sat Apr 05, 2014 1:02 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate task 1
Replies: 6
Views: 1708

Re: Please evaluate task 1

Hi andytruong1202 please suggest me how can i improve my writing and avoid grammar mistakes .I shall be very thankful for your help
by AhmadMukhtiar
Sat Apr 05, 2014 12:52 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate task 1
Replies: 6
Views: 1708

Re: Please evaluate task 1

thank you ...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Sat Apr 05, 2014 12:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate task 1
Replies: 6
Views: 1708

Re: Please evaluate task 1

Can anybody suggest me to reduce the word count and give an opinin ... I will highly appreciate it.
by AhmadMukhtiar
Fri Apr 04, 2014 6:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate task 1
Replies: 6
Views: 1708

Please evaluate task 1

Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening Dear Omar, I was overwhelm...
by AhmadMukhtiar
Thu Mar 27, 2014 8:10 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Does British council provide headphones?
Replies: 7
Views: 13692

Re: Does British council provide headphones?

Ofcourse i will let you know but only after the exams :D