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hi allen, I have some comments, have a look, discuss if you have any discrepancies.. Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to submit my essay on the due date - 05 May 2014. The essay topic I chose you have given a topic, it wasn't your choice is "The difference betwee...

You were given an essay form a teacher of an evening class. You didn’t finish the essay. So write to the teacher include: Subject of the essay Why you can’t finish it How you can submit it ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...

Hi Allen, I understand your alterations in my writing.....no comments at this stage... Hi Robin, as far as I understood from Ryna's essay we can use personal examples if these could be appropriate... I scored band 7 in writing when they didn't ask about my personal experience, but I included. Its ab...

Competitiveness among high school students should be encouraged. Do you agree or disagree? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Over the last decade, competition among people has significantly increased the w...

First, i really liked your essay length, just over 250 words..try to be around 260-270 just in case if you use some phrases from question Over the last five decades, violence among young people has significantly increased with the development of violent media such as newspaper, television and inter...

Hi, I think this one is a weird topic, normal life includes playing sports, eating healthy and taking medicines....then how can I differentiate. anyway, in the first supporting para, you said your grandmother walks for 2 kms, its still a physical excercise, do you think its a normal life. I didn't s...

hi,

first one is GT and second one is Academic, both have different question in the same test centre itself.

if you want to check...check questions with the module.

Durai

Hi Allen, first sentence not necessarily relevant to the topic, its just a general background statement, so you can talk something related to subject, here the subject is " nursery school or primary school" question says " should we send children to nursery'. so, I said " childre...

Hi,
This could be around band 6 to 6.5 ( in my view only )

but, did you see...in conclusion you made a blunder mistake, go through first sentence again..it affects your mark to a very extent...

Durai

hi,

I feel this essay is too long for me to check...should be around 400 words.

In my opinion, writing more than 280 words is not recommended by the any IELTS tutor.

durai..

Should children go to nursery schools prior to their primary schools? Do you agree or disagree? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Over the last decade, the number of children who go to primary schools has significantly increased the wor...

thanks Allen,

In second supporting para i was thinking different words for " affect normal life", but couldn't think mof any.


do you have any weird essay topic to discuss...

thanks Neha,

Good luck for your results...

Durai

Hi Neha,

Do you mind to share your speaking your questions?

Thanks
Durai

Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures should be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. ----------------------------------------------...

In recent years, there is a dramatic increase on car accidents all over the world, and it has become one of the leading causes of mortality. People have different views on what is the best solution to reduce road accident s and to improve road safety. While some people believe that stiff stiff? stri...

thanks Allen... I agree...but while writing I am struggling to keep the tone appropriate...may be I should go through many letters. here is one task 2 question for you. Some students think that wearing a uniform in school is affecting their freedom while others disagree. How much freedom should the ...

Describe a foreign film that you enjoyed watching. *

You should say:

what type of film it was

who the actors were

what the film was about

and explain what you liked about this film.

It is a highly debat able ( or 'debated') issue whether learners should study themselves or in a group. From my point of view, it is better for students to learn alone for several reasons. One of the most advantages in studying individually is that learners are likely to pay full attention to the le...

You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take Dear Sir or Ma...

Hi Allen, here is my personal suggestions and views.. Well, you know I was scoring consistently band 6 when I try to explain more than one point in one paragraph. I I followed Simon's way of writing, also, that time my Grammar wasn't good either. in fact, about 3 tests , my writing band 6 , 6 and 6....

Thanks Allen, I keep your points....may be my examples sound irrelevant...but I can't think when my time was running. i need to keep my nervousness down.....and look for points that explains the topic sentence very clearly.... I think everyone can produce good essays if they give more time..its a ma...

Hi Allen,

Can you check this work for me please?

Durai

It is true that the ideology on children upbringing varies from culture to culture. In some countries, especially remove 'those, in Asia, children are often required to follow strict rules, whereas many western parents prefer to give more autonomy to their kids. kids sounds informal , use 'little on...

In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons? What problems might think this cause on the society? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...